FINISH THIS STORY!

Oh, cool! This looks like fun! Update soon! _

Ice Princess

Ah! That song! I know that song! That was genious! _ Off to read ch. 3 now! _

Ice Princess

:D *hugs you insanely* Yes! I love it. It's great to see that they're getting along! I can't wait for more, keep writing! . moop!

that was so good!

*Stares at Pietro* What are you doing? RUN! RUN FOR THE LOVE OF G-D! Run and don't look back, boy. There is NO way you can deal with this pressure! You only care about yourself, it's okay, we all know this, you're working on it we understand but you CANNOT DO THIS.

*Now shaking Marty and Pietro* Dear LORD haven't you people heard of "adoption"? IT'S A LIFE SAVER. Honestly, the kid's going to be better off in a stable home with two adult parents and a healthy income than in a teenage single parent environment with a dad who's barely around and has the attention span that rivals that of a two-year-old's. Trust me, giving up this child will save it's life. You can start going through adoption agencies that will set your child up with decent background-checked parents before it's born. This...is a good option. You two can try Jewish adoption agencies, they GAURENTEE your child a home. Save this child if your going to have it at all.

*Slyly to Pietro* Listen hun, nobody is going to blame you if Marty "accidentily" falls down the stairs or slips on a patch of ice. Things like this DO happen. Plus...she's REALLY annoying. I mean, out of all the one-night-stands, YEESH! And still, no one said it was no-question your kid. Hey...it could be ANY guy's kid. That could've been any NUMBER of men she slept with that night. Or any OTHER night. There's NO proof you're the father. Your word against hers, hun. Yours against hers.

So my advice is to put the child up for adoption. Giving Pietro a baby is like putting an angry, rabid, viper in with a sickly white rat. It's just doomed.

.;;

Pietro is going to be a proper dad, like, actually care and everything?

THAT'S GREAT! :D

Most people would totally have him being the uncaring jerk, I love this twist. :) Keep goin' with it!

Lovin' it!

Maikafuiniel

Wow, this is a beutiful fic. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

Aw, Pietro is so swet. I love this fic, keep it up!

I thought Pietrs was going to get his ass kicked! lol That would hace been cool though. I have to wonder if they did attack him would he use his power? Hum...anyways I love it please write more.

Teehee, awsome fic quirky and fast, you have to write more! I will be waiting XD

Aha! You've written more! I only knew because I added you to my author alert thing _0 Yes... I've been waiting quite some time for this, and it was worth the wait! Great chapter! Love the mafia idea

Pietro's in trouble with the Mafia? Col...

I demand you to update soon!I DEMAND YOU!

YOU SUCK! I wish I could write like you. Your story is great! When I find the time I will read the rest of your stories, kk?