 HorrorFan13 2009-07-13 . chapter 1That lucky bitch... |
 Meirelle 2008-02-01 . chapter 1O_O; |
 BlueTigerElf 2006-02-12 . chapter 1This was.. very disturbing. There were a few mispellings and there is scientific proof that it's really impossible for people to tickle themselves and laugh. And this goes really wrong with the series. After all, Arcee is the main girl for Rodimus not this bitch Michelle. Sure he didn't want to have sex with the girl but with that one paragraph that he was actually enjoying it?.. I'm sorry, but this story is sick and twisted. |
 Seiberwing 2005-10-19 . chapter 1 You do realize that this is NC-17 stuff, and doesn't belong on this site. You should delete it before it gets reported. |
 2005-04-24 . chapter 1 Hey, Simply Crisis, I think that you lost your mind. Kinky? How can being raped be kinky?
Didn't you read about the part in where he told her to stop over and over again?
Poor Rodimus. I hope that he will have someone that will help him through this experience. |
 Simply Crisis 2003-11-17 . chapter 1Wow i like it was kinky
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