nice

that was so sad. *tear* i never expected it to be from souta's point of view until the end

omg...it was SO sad, i read it awhile ago, and i was SURE i reviewd...in the start i thougth it was inu, but after a while i understod it wasn't him...shrine and all, but it's really good and sad story...you made me cry -...-'

Ja!

Ofir

oh. its so sad i almost cried. wait... i did cry and i am now it was so sad and beautifully written. oh! poor souta. hm. ok well your stoires are great so i forget why i wrote this. ah well. great any way.

Wow, that was pretty heart wrenching. Poor Souta...

It's kind of interesting to see how much you've got him acting like his idol Inuyasha after he's gotten a bit older. I look forward to reading the rest of the fic.

Heh. For a sec there I thought it was Shippou ranting at Inuyasha. **scratches head** I never would've thought of Souta and the well.

Very well done.

_x

Chiruken

Hika-chan

Oh, that was SO sad! But I loved it! It's now officially one of my faves. I feel sorry for Souta. At first though, I thought it was InuYasha, then I thought it was Shippo. But NOW I know it's Souta. I feel for him, poor kid. Well, please some of my ficcies!

NekoYasha/NaniYasha

aw...that was so sad...you're right. no one gives souta any attention! i have to admit though, i thought it was three different characters till i got to the end. First i thought shippo was pissed at inuyasha, then inuyasha pissed at the well, and finally souta when he started talking about kagome being his sister.

...did you mean to do that?

Aw... ::just has to sniffle:: It's true he doesn't get much attention. And, his, as well as the rest of the family's, side of it seems to be (in my reading thus far anyways) often forgotten when it happens that Kagome finds herself trapped in the Feudal era at the end. It's nice to see that perspective explored. Even though it's so horribly sad.

Wow! that was new, and it was good too! wow

Oh, that was so good! You're right, poor Souta doesn't get enough attention. Of course everyone probably thinks Inuyasha is the one the story is about at first... well, at least, I did... maybe it's 'cause that's the usual trend in these stories, but yours is an awesome new take on it! I really liked it! But it's so sad! ;_;

GACK! I love a good twist, and that wasn't a good twist, that was a great twist! The language was an excellent touch - naturally, we think of our little foul-mouthed inuhanyou, but wouldn't a bitter little brother, three years down the road in the modern era be equally adept at cursing?

I *loved* it!