*cries* PADFOOT!

Loved the poem.

It's so beautiful... but I wish that you didn't have to write it... because I wish he weren't dead! *Sob* Sirius was my favorite...

...Wow...breathtaking! I write poetry myself and I feel inspired by this! Darn you and being great! Jk ^_^ Beautifully done!

I quite liked it. :)

*tear*
emotions running rampant
~SHE DIDN'T DO IT, SHE CAN'T HAVE DONE IT! WE WON'T STAND FOR IT, MS. ROWLING! *tear* Unless we - *sob* - _have_ to. . .
*bursts out crying.

That was beautiful!

This is the best tribute I read so far.
Of course, Sirus is the brightest star. I wish somewhere could tell Harry, "Look! Your godfather never leaves you. He's up there, shining down on you. He still takes care of you, Harry."

A beautiful tribute. I'm sure Sirius would appreciate this.

That was fantastic. My favorite part was the last stanza. I wrote a tribute for Sirius as well, if you want to check it out.

Great Poem, so sad though.

That was beautifully written poem.
I heard Harry's voice reciting it or maybe even Remus Lupin's voice when I was reading it.
Good job!

wow.
I can't say anything more, that was amazing, but so sad! You are so talented.

*whispers (i feel it is apropriate to whisper)* ohh poor sirius! its so sad. oh and poor harry! *hugs em both*

great poem! so sad... but thats how i write poems to. i cant right happy so theyre sad.

Caitlyn

Oh,that was so sweet, the contrast between light and dark (or black)...Ah, poor Harry...Poor Remus...Now write one about how sexy Snape is; school is starting again and I will need something to amuse myself!

Well then, until the last stanza it could have been Severus' poem.
I do not feel at all qualified to comment further. *wink* thought I would review anyway.

Wow! That is so good. You know, that is true. The last thing he saw...the black veil. The last thing he heard...Harry calling his name. You done good, girl!