that was good and very well written

Well, well, well ... I never dreamed of finding a Gohan/Vegeta fic that I would like. I think they're an odd couple ...

That's not the point. I like this fic, because both of them are as in-character as possible for a V/Gh. Your grammar and spelling are of a high standard, and the descriptions are great. The lovemaking scene was like watching a beautifully choreographed fight scene. Good job. By the way, this is the first M/M story to go into my favourites list on this site ... *chuckles*

While the subject matter is a little disturbing, it's still a great piece of work... the imagery is terrific!

that was SO great! update now! omgz i cant wiat for youre next story, lol!!11

Cool... I enjoyed that!! Woohoo!! Good stuff.. want to read more sometime! ^_^

That was interesting. I like Gohan/Vegeta pairings. Good job!

O_O! That was amazing! May I host this also?