i really liked this fic. it was very well written and the song went good with it. but the abuse thing is up for debate, it all depends on who you talk to and what sites you go to.

I really liked this. Rowen is used a lot for the abused child but the way his character is (at least in the english dub) he is set up for it.

awesome how you made this story into a pat benetar song! that is a good song also, "hell is for children"

SHIT THAT WAAS SO MEAN! You like Pat Benetar? cool someone else who likes her! but still that was really mean

I agree with the choice of the song for this fic. And Rowen should have moved out a lot sooner! In some ways, he reminds me of Xander on Buffy: Having to deal with an abusive parent, teaming up with a hero. Not a bad little fic.

Hey, no! I want some more, please expand it. Turn it into a story, explain about the abuse afterwards, please? I'd like to think that Rowen has SOME hope of getting healed from this. He can find comfort in his friends, maybe a girl that he marries...make a friendship out of this with one of the other troopers! I so think this could go on, PLEASE!