OMG...this story is one of the best I've ever seen! Most of the stories on about Artemis Fowl are too angsty, have bad grammer, or I just don't like them. I'm not a huge Arty/Holly fan. Personally, I think that pairing is scary. *shudders* I'm more of a Holly/Trouble fan, and they are so much more compatible, and a lot of the stories on FF are Arty/Holly, too. One of the pairings I ABSOLUTELY HATE are Artemis/OC. I hate all Mary-Sues! I give your story a five-star review!

Your writing is excellant! It has a very strong resemblence to Eoin Colfer's writing, especially when u describe Holly's trip up the chute and her walk through Haven. Foaly seems OOC in chapter 2, though, I think he would be a little (major understatement) less calm if his system shut off like that. And all the LEP technology, hospitals, and prisons remained functional in EC when Arty pinged them. I doubt that the LEP would trust Howler's Peak residents to remain complacent when the fate of the People may depend on it, if they were in danger from humans (or magical crystals) it is doubtful that they would leave fairies above ground alone and exposed, and sick or injured fairies won't choose a convenient time to be so.
But it's a good story overall and I like it.
So UPDATE!

Great story so far. You've really put in some cool descriptions and a nice plot. Everyone really sounds IC even Arty who can be pretty hard to keep that way at times. ^__^
I hope you post another chapter soon! Bye! ^_-

danger,danger,danger,.



DARK GREEN NOT PURPLE!

purple is evil...

o... the diary is just like our dear arty...
you make it seem like something bad is going to happen when arty goes in the water...

cool.

Uh oh... Holly's doomed... Not really, but still... fingers cold... can't type... will I end every sentance with a...?

Mage Kitty ^^

This fic is so well written! it's awsome, please write more soon! hurry!!

This is so good! Yayness! Your writing abilities are absolutely amazing! It flows beautifully and your humor is great! Plus it's an A/H fic! Awesome! There aren't enough of those! I can't wait for the next chapter! This is going on my favorites list! Keep up the good work! ~.^

O.o ME LIKES! U HAVE TO UPDATE!! O PLEASE? O PLEASE!? PLEASE??

*smiles* I like your story. A lot.

Ho hum.

I like your story. I wonder why not many people have reviewed it.

Oh, wow. You updated. Yay!

A few nitpicks. "A grand total of no less than" sounds awkward. Use either "a grand total" or "no less than". Could a goblin share a cell with a dwarf without one of them killing each other?

Now for the "I likes". I like the goblin cellmate and his plans to take over the world, ahem, LEP. (And yes, I'm aware the goblin roommate was also one of my nitpicks. I'm fickle like that.) I *really* like Holly's dilemma. *Please* don't make us wait another two months to update. It's a really good, interesting, engaging story.

Your first chapter is living up to the promise of the prologue. The Hope Diamond (very nice tie-in - if that's the word I'm looking for, which I'm thinking not)? Holly's equipment failing? Please do us all a favour and hurry to get the next part out!

Excellent beginning! Truly excellent. You've set it up well - it looks like it's going to be a great story.