i know this story is over 5 yrs old but could u finish this because i am big fan love hina and i think this is a good story!

Hm I must say that I also love this fanfic. To tell you the truth this is the first fanfic I have ever read with people combining (except for DBZ fics) and I am hoping you will continue this

great fic i hope you have keitaro end up with all the girls that love him in the end.

Its great

im glad that this is back.

This I must say is definitely and interesting departure from the normal way that most people try to fix the mess that is the romantic multi-angle that is the life of one Urishima Keitaro. I found the idea of Maru to very inventive, although it gets more hilarious as the situation becomes even more out of control.

Maximum excellence. I highly enjoyed this!

I certainly wasn't expecting this story to continue after Motoko married Keitaro. Still, it is probably best that it did continue or there really isn't any purpose behind the Maru spin. I'm also surprised that the other girls let Keitaro go so easily after being willing to join together to be with him. That's just me though.

Looking good,

brindani

What problems are you talking about Forsaken?

They had no problem with Motoko and Keitaro marrying each other.

Re-read chapter 10 dude.

Wait I thought all the girls wanted to be Maru because they were willing to share Keitaro. Isn't strange that they change their minds now? Thank you for restarting the story, it's good. Update soon. A KeitaroXMaru pairing would cause less problems for the household any

Interesting trouble.

So, it seems that there is yet more excitement ahead.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Oh boy, looks like things are still wonky, and with Maru making unscheduled appearances, this is going to be just throwing more gas on the flames.

YAY! this is awsome i loved the firstpart and now i cant wait for it to continue

Awesome chapter! I thought it was finish; man, was I glad I was wrong or what.

Love the little twist you add to the story. While I love Motoko/Keitaro pairing, I'm sure many of your readers out there would've been sharing for you to keep Maru around. I guess this is the best course of action after all.

LOL

Like I said last post: GO MOTOKO-CHAN!