I loved this story! I have tears. I love Kagome's character. I want to read about than any type of female lead, a good person. In the end she was selfless through and through. And her innocence was suited to her Miko-ness. I am, Kagome is cute when she's feisty and all but its gets to be boring sometimes. Fics just make her yell a lot.
It was written well. I have to admit though ... the first chapter is kind of out of place. I mean the rest of the story was so good and the first chapter was like rushed. Understandable though since you built this story backwards. It's nothing you can fix.

So dark but so beautiful. I wish there were more. Thank you for a very enjoyable and emotional read.

Due to so little Inu/Kag stories being worth reading, I have recently resorted to Sess/Kag. And I must say that this story was simply beautiful. You give just enough to leave the reader satisfied yet wanting. I see that this story is old, but I hope that this review finds you well and that you bring some comfort that someone enjoys the words you wrote so long ago.
~Maria

I'd say I enjoyed this... but 'enjoy' isn't really the right word for it. ...It was a very dark, very introspective read, but nevertheless achingly beautiful in its own way.

Will be looking into your other works. Thanks for sharing!

rather depressing story...but unbearably good. i liked the alternate ending, it made up for the sadness i felt at the end of the actual ending. it made me laugh although it was slightly hard to follow...anyways great job.

I loved this story. I almost stopped reading it at the first chapter because I thought Inuyasha was dead, but wanted to see where you went with this and continued to read, anyway. I'm glad I did. Sesshomaru was true to character and so was kagome throughout the story and I liked the ending. The alternate ending had me ROTF too! Great job.

When the story ended, I didn't know if I liked the ending or not. Then i thought about it and realized that if you really want to keep Sesshomaru in character, you can't rush this relationship. The ending wasn't what i expected, but it was good enough. If you made them fall i love and be togther, I would have been happy but it would have been less realistic. The plot you had was amazing, and overall it was a wonderful story. It was nice seeing Sesshy change through out the story. Thanks for writing a wonderful fanfiction. many people might not like the ending, but theyre used to all of the endings being happy and the people falling in love. For this story, a continuation would be necessary for them to fall in love. i was happy with yourchoice.
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what a wonderful, tragic, heartbreaking story. It even made me cry. It was so beautiful, so perfect, but I was really rather disappointed with the ending. Okay. Extremely disappointed. After all of the build up, and well written plot line, there wasn't even the slightest bit of fluffy kagomexsesshoumaru love moment? I thought surely at the end, she'd go back to Inuyasha and being without eachother would drive them both crazy and they'd meet again and finally fall in love. It just seems LAZY that you decided to end it right here. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? Geez. Tease me with this beautiful, tragic, heartbreaking, perfect, little love story and then...nothing. Thanks. What a waste.

Breathtaking...

wow i love this!

aw! i like it!!
I almost stoped reading after the 1st chapter, because i thought inuyasha died! but im glad i didnt! your a great writer! it looks like this is going to end up as one of my favs!! :)

so...the story is complete now?

GREAT STORY! I was waiting for Inuyasha to rescue her :). Great ending :).

that was a very sucky ending, no affence but it was not an intended flame

keep up the good job