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Behan
2009-09-02 . chapter 16
*wipe tears*...this is one of the most beautiful heart wrenching story i ever read and i am very sad that it has came to an end...*applause*...and you are one hell of a writer too...everything was perfect...the characters were very intense and so real that it makes the story more awesome than it already is...and i love the way how you focus on different character and not so much on only one...i think you did an exceptional job on Tsuzuki and Hisoka...they were very true to their character as if i am really seeing them acting like that in reality...but i must admit i am disappointed that there really wasn't any intense romance ** between them...but i kind of guess that it suits their character ^^...although i was a bit jealous of Tatsumi and Tsuzuki relationship, even thought i know Tsuzuki doesn’t really love Tatsumi in a romantic sense...you know, i actually wasn't really hating hating Isorou, although what he did to Tsuzuki was totally unforgivable (i hate him for that)...but in the back of my mind, i thought Isorou was a good guy underneath all that hatred and mean ** of his...Isouro seems like a kid lashing out to hide his loneness or something like that...but i think how it ended with Isouro was a fitting end, although it would have been nice if he was given a second chance...overall I really really really enjoyed reading your story immensely…and the ending was just perfect…I really hope that there will be a sequel…maybe a bit more in depth into Hisoka and Tsuzuki budding lovey dovey relationship (I doubt that will happen but I can always hope ^__~)…thank you for sharing…and just love this story!
Kendecia
2008-11-26 . chapter 16
*stares at screen in disbelief*
...It...It's over...?
Wow... Crap.
I really loved it! too bad it's over already. Lovin the angst!
Francesca Akira89
2007-03-23 . chapter 1
(sorry, I'm italian) Uhm, ma come? Ce lo chiudi così? Niente di fatto tra Hisoka e Tsuzuki e quel sussurro inquietante finale? The sequel, please! With a happy ending!
Lady Psychic
2007-03-12 . chapter 16
Wow! This is an awesome story. It was well written and had an awesome plot. Once I started reading I couldn't stop, and I read it all in one setting. Anyways, good job!
Chelly
2005-10-12 . chapter 16
"The trial" is now one of my all time fave Yami fics! This story kept me up reading all night. Boy was it worth it !

I have to say I especially like the way the characters are written. They just feel like in the anime and manga. Plus you managed to create an evil bastard worthy of Muraki (not an easy task).
What I enjoyed most though, was the interaction with Tsuzuki, Hisoka and Tatsumi. Tatsumi was so incredible here, protective, sweet, strong, just great. I adored your Hisoka, the night he visited Tsuzuki... aw sweetness.
In summary, i had a great time reading a good, long fic with an interesting plot and worthy of these wonderful characters. Thank you!
Vampiress-Alexiel
2005-10-09 . chapter 16
aw I love this fanfiction!! Great job! it really seems like all of this could happen in the Manga or Anime!! *sniffs* I love it so much... A sequel would be very very cool in the future! I'll keep my eyes on you ;) (not to be creepy or anything)
WhiteWolfCub
2005-10-05 . chapter 16
ZOMG! That was really good! *huggles Hisoka* Anyway, I will be looking forward to that sequel at anytime! Hope you have one! Maybe Hisoka will be kidnapped? I don't know, I just want it! Okay, enough of that, goodbye!
DarkSapphireDragon
2005-10-01 . chapter 16
Yay! You finished part of this awesome fic! It's so good! Wow, this took a while and you wrote a lot! Not that I'm complaining, mind you. I enjoyed waiting for you to update each beautifully written chapter and I love this fic so much! I really can't wait for when you decide to write a sequel to this. I'll have to keep a lookout for updates. Until then! Amazing job! ^-^
makasarili
2005-09-29 . chapter 16
Thank you for finishing. Wonderful. A story I will revisit with pleasure in the future.
NaTsUkO-ChAn
2005-09-16 . chapter 16
WAhoo! nice story!I've just finished it in 2 DAYS!^^ It was really nice. Not to much suspens I guess and It shows that there are still more meaning of everything every little thing that was left a lil' unfinished and more fights to go on living. You're story held meaningful themes and really well explained- and enjoyable reading. It's a lovely fic and hope to see more of it coming in the future!^^
NaTsUkO-ChAn
2005-09-16 . chapter 14
How could you?! How could you?! How could YOU?! Gods! I'm actually crying because of you! *points accusingly at author* lol. Wow... You're really good to actually make me shed tears. It's really so SO SO SAD! ok.. nedd happy anding. Next chappie!^^
NaTsUkO-ChAn
2005-09-15 . chapter 6
HIHI^^

Hmm to answer your question. I have a feeling there must be something 'bout Isorou if you ask 'bout him and for your moto of 'All things happens for a reason'. I think he is not as bad as he looks like. Example: Earl, Muraki and Tatsumi^^

I think he is a man who hold his promises, gentle when he wants to, a man who controls his emotions well and a man who must have gone through a hell lot of pain to become the man he is.

He must not have meet many kind people like Tsuzuki and wish to punish those people who he thinks are guilty and 'People will always want something in return of an act'. am I right? I hope I am. hehe^^
NaTsUkO-ChAn
2005-09-15 . chapter 5
Wow. That was really nice and like you say; all things happens for a reason and I don't think it was a lame or corny chapter. i think it was great. Filling in the details for us to catch up with the story and I feel you've putten it up and explain your story really well. I was particularly squealing when the two Owls were talking and hints that they were actually wanting to tell Tsuzuki; he IS innocent^^.Curiosity kills the cat and I'm off to te next chappie!
NaTsUkO-ChAn
2005-09-15 . chapter 4
Oh my god! That was so so GREAT! I mean. I don't know it was just so amazing and I'm so pulled!

oTsuzuki and I was really mad and actually wanting to scream at that idiot of too big ego man. 'Hmph' Poor Hisoka..*cries* O Tasumi's really brave and sweet. *nods head ethusiasticly* Wah Next chappire here I come^^
NaTsUkO-ChAn
2005-09-15 . chapter 1
Hello^^

hehe... Wow, Your story is really splendid! I like your writing style. It's really simple and neat.=P Not too much of difficult words. Just simply putting those words in such a nice and fitting way that it really shows of the what you really want to explain; like the way your characters moves have meanings and words gives of more than one emotions. I felt like I was almost in thier position and could feel what they would also feel! It's really lovely. Simple, understandable and Outstanding. hehehe^^ OK I'm gonna read the next chapter. great start^^

O... another thing. To me Hisoka's that really defensive brat and won't put down his gaurd no matter how nice a person can be except for those who are truely sincere like Tsuzuki^^ but in the manga, he still wasn't THAT open with Tsu. Even if it's after Kyoto incident, wouldn't it takes him for some time to really put down his defense? O.o hehe just my opinion^^ but I still like what u did to the story. Ok next chappie! ^^
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