|Reviews for Momentum|
| Magic Pyro Anabeil 4/14/12 . chapter 1
I absolutely LOVED this!
I loved how you kept comparing Kaiba and Jou. It highlights their personalities so well! The story flowed beautifully and was so well-written! D
I NEVER leave reviews, but this story is so good that I felt like I needed to. Great job! Loved it!
| TheOneLeftBehindByTime 4/7/12 . chapter 1
no matter the time and no matter of how many fics I read with Kaijou.. this and the rest of your writings are forever my overall favourites! /w/ srs, you are sooo great in getting both of them in character, the way you write is soo darn wonderful and explains so greatly everything, details, thoughts, feelings... everything! 3 and I so especially love how you succeed in putting some fluff here and there while still keeping them in character, and how they still are assholes against each other but still not! sheesh, this is like the 5th or something time I have read all your YGO stories and I so had to tell you how much I enjoy it, hope to see more Kaijou stories sometime from you C; 3 keep up the awesome work!
| shadowdark-kitten 2/1/12 . chapter 1
I humbly offer you more blatant ego-stroking praise- A fist attempt in a fandom is difficult to do, but this one seems very spot-on to me. You slipped *right* into the heads of the characters.
Thank you for sharing this story!
| Alpha1Waves 9/5/11 . chapter 1
I really like your writing, eer considered a sequel?
| dancing elf 8/28/11 . chapter 1
| Toki Mirage 7/28/11 . chapter 1
No sequel? *pouts*
very nice fic. *evil grin* in character and everything
| x-Guitar-x-Girl-x 5/30/11 . chapter 1
I love how detailed and descriptive this short story is; usually, I tend to skim-read most fanfictions out of bordom or annoyance caused by bad grammar and poorly constructed sentences, but I read each and every word of this. Well done. I love how in character Kaiba was throughout, especially his denial and refusal to admit defeat.
| Kuroneko Hikage 8/6/10 . chapter 1
| Riiiceballe 5/8/10 . chapter 1
Awww... that's wonderfully fluffy. Great work! :)
| AyaplusBeat 2/2/10 . chapter 1
This is stunning, as well as earning it's place in my overloaded favourites list which has to be cleaned. xD
| chocolatelover1 10/16/09 . chapter 1
lol Very cute and very nice.
| Kitty Caesar 8/7/09 . chapter 1
Wonderful read! :D
| IllusionOfAghony 4/4/09 . chapter 1
one word, WOW. That was amazing, and sadly enough I can see Seto not only not knowing a thing about cars and logging every tune up and gas up but geting a C on DDR. Amazing piece of fiction, this one comends you
| darkgreenpriestess 11/16/08 . chapter 1
That was one hot Kiss scence..
Wow. This story is awesome Keep up the great work
| EsophagealEruption 10/13/08 . chapter 1
I'll go with ego-stroking praise. Or try to.
-The characters were...Totally in character, which I am finding increasingly uncommon in every fandom, but especially in this one.
-Your vocabulary is stunning and refreshing after reading such dry, maximum-six-letter-word fictions for so long, if you know what I mean.
-The grammar was impeccable, which is also another rarity in this day and age. I applaud you.
-Your descriptions are not succinct and to-the-point. They are flowing and open, and give the reader a sense of being there, of seeing the entire fiction take place. I heart it very much.
-First attempt at slash. My only comment for this is "Whoa."
Overall, I was dazzled. Amazed. Stupefied, even. I'm going to have to admit that this is probably the best puppyshipping one-shot, possibly the best puppyshipping fanfiction in general, thatI have ever read.
And, your father's knowledge of automobiles is fantastic. Well done.