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DarkBombayAngel
2009-06-30 . chapter 9
I love it!! It's so good!! ^-^
Memory Dragon
2006-05-21 . chapter 9
You're the first person to notice and I've had it this way for like... two years now I think, lol. I don't think you over-did Aya-chan... Really any kind of cheery disposition would suit her. She's only awake for like... a minute or so in the anime, not including flashbacks. It just amuses me greatly that she has shounen-ai fantasies about her own brother... I can just picture her in this chapter, watching from the other room, trying not to squee loudly when Ran finally makes a move, lol... xD Anyway, keep going! I'd love to see a new chapter soon.

~*~MemoryDragon~*~
Susan009
2006-01-09 . chapter 9
Would love to see this finished. There aren't many Aya/Omi fics out there, even if it is my favorite pairing among the Weiss.
karin1004
2005-12-31 . chapter 9
I hope you update soon!
Eclipse02134
2005-11-25 . chapter 9
Really hope that you finish this fic. Its hard to find Aya?omi fics. I also like the interaction between Aya and his siter.
Crazy Irish Lass
2005-07-01 . chapter 9
*grins* I'm gonna hug you now ^^ *tackle glomps*
P.S. want more
FlyWithoutWingz
2005-06-28 . chapter 9
Yay! Ran confess! Ran confess! Ran confess! Such young and sweet love! Whoo!
*going all hyper and glomps the author* I love this chapter! Yay!
--Now I better be working on mine -_-; Stupid Writer block-- Yup we're in the same boat where it rocks here and there and everywhere. *gives ice cream cone* Great Chappie! See ya in the next chapter! ~_^
Kasra
2005-06-20 . chapter 8
It's been a while since this story has been updated, but it was very easy to pick up once again, as it sucked me right back into the narrative. I rather like how you've developed Aya-chan's character, a contrast to Ran's moodiness, sunshine and smiles to Ran's frowns and gloom. But there's more to Ran than just that, and I think you've brought that forth well as the story has progressed.

Very enjoyable.
FlyWithoutWingz
2005-06-10 . chapter 8
YA! An update! Hurray! Omi made his confession! Now I wonder what Ran is going to do...hm...
I'm gonna need to update my stories too...ehehehehe...*gives chocolate* Great job! See ya next chapter! -^_^-
Memory Dragon
2005-06-09 . chapter 8
Once again, Aya-chan shines through with her Shounen-ai fantasies. ^^ It's good to see that you haven't given up on the fic.
Crazy Irish Lass
2005-06-09 . chapter 8
WO HOO! *tackels* You finally updated I love you! I loved this chapter, espshall the end! PLease gimme more soon, I can't wait!
Crazy Irish Lass
2005-04-20 . chapter 6
OK, for one I've been jiped out of a 7th chapter and I would like to know what these other people are talking about. And second WHAT THE HELL!? IT'S BEEN ALMOST TWO YEAR AND NOTHING FROM YOU, PLEASE DON'T QUITE ON THIS, I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS!
L'Ananda
2004-06-16 . chapter 6
Wow, I just reread your fic and I realized that you hadn't finished it. I had asumed that you had. Well, I hope that you update soon, becasue its great. Ja!
chibi_kai_fan
2003-11-25 . chapter 6
Wah! Your story is so nice! I love it! Pls. continue! I really love Ran&Omi fics!

And can you help me find some Ran&Omi fics? I having trouble finding them...Onegai! I only need the title...
Memory Dragon
2003-11-15 . chapter 7
You know, I'm really beginning to like Aya-chan. She's evil. ^-^ Looking forward to more Aya-chan manipulative moments. Would be a shame to have them accidently get together on their own and foil all of her plans. ^_~ Hm... what could Manx have in mind? Guess I'll just have to wait and find out!

~*~ Star Dragonsong ~*~
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