Interesting poetry, i liked part one alot! Leo's l'il sista

Short.
Sweet.
Powerful.

O...I like it! Anyways, one reason i'm reviewing is cause it's an awesome poem and the second is cause I think you should think about writing at Fictionpress.com also, it's for orginal poems and stories, check it out if you want...or not. =+)

~Brie~