 AnimeFreak218 2009-04-20 . chapter 11interesting... i love this story!
so shes mutating more as time passes? sweet.
UPDATE this soon! |
 Lady Danielle 2006-01-13 . chapter 11 I really loved your story. Please update! Please!! Please! Please! |
 Baka Onna-chan 2004-12-29 . chapter 11 O.O |
 ayu 2004-11-08 . chapter 11 okay...it seems like deidra, chameleon n viper r probably da same person right...if i'm not mistaken...anyway keep up the good work n keep me informed on the updates...thanx.. |
 Cari-anne 2004-08-13 . chapter 10Hey this is a really great story, I like it alot. I can't wait to see what happens next I am left hanging. Keep on writing, I think Deidra is a great character and you've done a great job showing her thoughts. |
 Dawnfighter 2004-08-10 . chapter 10 Sorry. I've been meaning to write a reveiw for you but I got spyware and it all went down from there. I like your story. I think it's one of the better OC fics in this fandom. Some are really really bad. Sometimes I have to use the fan appreciation bat. If you've ever read MegaTokyo vol.1 chapter 0 you'd know what I'm talking about but if you don't that's okay. Anyways, is Deidra gonna run again? Is she gonna trust the X-geeks err...freaks...err... heh heh heh. You can tell I'm not a real big fan of the X-men team. I like the Brotherhood better. What will the scientists do? Please write the next chapter.
Some things to think about are: Will Deidra act violently when the scientists find her? Will she think the X-men betrayed her *again*? Or will she totally trust them. Which I think is unlikely since she just met them. Anyways, please write. |
 paprika90 2004-08-06 . chapter 10OH! BIG time suspence! im so lovin this story! lol cant wait till you update!! ^_^ |
 paprika90 2004-07-24 . chapter 9 wow. this story is very cool. it totally rocks! i love deidra's mutation abilities! i cant wait to read your next chapter soon! ^_^ |
 Aoide 2004-07-16 . chapter 8 O! O! Continue! So interesting! Wonderful Plot! Um, when will I find out why Wanda hates Deidra? Oh by the way, cool name. :-P |
 maxcitogal 2004-01-31 . chapter 8 hey its katie, i think you should have deidra find a love interest. they have to get around the whole poison kisses thing. if she joins xmen they need to make and antivenom. maybe deidra should have some other abilities, like she can climb walls, or she preforms better in warm temperatures, maybe she has claws or some other added on powers?
hope you write soon
katie |
 katie barrie 2004-01-26 . chapter 8 when she found out she had venom i thought she would have to bite people's necks to inject it, but the kiss of death thing is very creative. when is she gonna dump toad and fall in love with some hot xman?
see you at school,
katie |
 katie barrie 2003-10-11 . chapter 7 hey, great writing. You told me you watched the show, right? You should see the movies. They are way better than that cartoon on wb. keep writing.
katie |
 Kaminarimon 2003-10-06 . chapter 7OOps, I haven't reviewed for the last 5 chapters. Sorry, it'as a bad habit of mine. I'm glad you liked the name Deidra, I think it suits her very well, especially with the way you've developed her character. I really like where this story is going, you're developing it very well.
Just a little word of advice, start a new paragraph for every new speaker when people are talking, it makes chapters seem bit longer but it also makes the easier to read.
Great job, keep it up :) |
 yuki san1 2003-09-26 . chapter 7So how did 'they' find her? COME ON, I REALLY WANT TO NOW! And, um...Nice chappy!
BUH-BYE ^.~ |
 Storm-Pietro 2003-09-19 . chapter 6I totally loved the story. It was great. and Yeah, my fic's been updated. so go and read it if ya gotta time. loved it. |