Reviews for Lily the Elven Princess

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technetium 2004-03-05 ch 5, anon.	abuseYay! Bravo! The ending was great, and I really liked the snarky attitude throughout the rest of the fic.
The Dark Elfy Chick 2004-02-28 ch 5,	abuse-Falls over laughing- I loved it! Your Mary Sues were so Mary Sueish, your cannon characters so wonderfully smitten and out of character--it was awesome! -Pelts Leggie and Ari plushies at the authoress- XD
wishful 2004-02-05 ch 5, anon.	abuseHahahahaa... that is THE BEST 'Sue parody EVER! OOh, I found another plothole: why were the orcs taking Lily to Isengard when it was Sauron who attacked? Oh, I loved this. I've read it through a good four times. Funness, I wish you'd write more!
Kippur 2003-10-17 ch 5, anon.	abuseGesundheit! cackles madly I so get a kick out of that. And you mentioned me in the Author's Notes! feels special In any case, very much enjoyablity found here. I just love the continual addition of Sues. Slowly exonerably, more and more one by one till they couldn't be anymore. Although I'm surprised Boromir didn't have one. I liked the ending, but it was, sorry to say this a bit on the cliched side. gasps in horror yup it seems to becoming a regular occurance in these parody types. At the end of the story the PPC shows up and takes them out. (Although in this case they seemed to have taken themselves out). I'm not sure what could have done to make it a different ending, but perhaps it is something to think about the next time a parody bunny bites you.
Ashly Potter 2003-10-13 ch 5,	abuseWhoo-hoo! Jay and Acacia! Heehee, I love the PPC stories. Well, anyway! Great parody! Glade it ended the way it did! Happy writings for whenever imagination stricks again! ~Fawkes Oh, yeah! I dounbt that many Mary-Sue authors have read the books, so the one comment in your last chapter, dunno. But I love how you made the 'author' say that the books were 'difficult to read.' :)
Ekwy 2003-10-13 ch 5, anon.	abuseBloody hilarious! Loved it, will always love it, amen.
BoromirDefender 2003-10-09 ch 3,	abuseYou have no idea how much I admire you for writing this - I tried to write a Sue parody too but failed because I got so damn bored with it. You've done a great job! :D
Ashly Potter 2003-09-29 ch 3,	abuseI'm pretty sure the horse was mentioned 5 times. Oh dear, daughter of Elrond again? Galadriel the mother? You don't know how many people I've seen that think Arwen is Galadriel's daughter. It's sad really. Well, keep going, this is funny! ~Fawkes
Phalanx 2003-09-29 ch 3,	abuseThis is pretty much the sarcastic culmination of every fanfic I've started reading only to give up because of I couldn't stop vomiting. Great work. Now if only I could pronounce that horse's name...
Ekwy 2003-09-29 ch 3, anon.	abuseI think, I THINK, that the stupidly long horse-name was mentioned six times. That's what I think. Oh, I haven't laughed this much for long time. I almost fell out of the couch. applauds To not continue with this would most certainly be a crime.
Ayezur 2003-09-28 ch 3,	abuseHorse-with-the-unpronouncable-name was named four times, I think. Poor Aragorn. gives him M&Ms I fear for Frodo, I really do.
Sword of Dragon Fire 2003-09-09 ch 2,	abuseonce agin a sue parody masterpice. how about her outher secret is that she's really a teenager from earth but she was born in EErin... EErin...ah scerw it, she was bron in whateverthatnamewas and she came back to her home a year ago or somthing like that. just a ranbom thought :)
yeah, right 2003-09-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseoh, SPARE me.
the_big_person_with_no_name 2003-09-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseHA!
Amber Oak 2003-08-31 ch 2,	abuseYay! waves flag that says, "Long live Sue paraodies!" Thank you for brightening my day. bows in your direction The sad part is that I've seen this trash before, and will indoubtly see it again. After this may sugest doing the girl-falls-into-M-e Sue? You know, the one who is abused by her classmates, parents, and tries to excuse her bitchy behavior on depression. Plothole: It was a secret council. Why would they send messengers to parts of Arda since it was secret? Do I have it? Amber Oak

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