hey Your story is nice very fluffy but very nice. I hope you will write other story cause your doing a god job. I just wanna know if you speak french because you said fin at the end of your story... Parce que moi oui loll ctè juste pour savoir... I have never seen people writing in french.

Love it! keep up the great work!

good story! the whole poison thing waz a good idea, but i don't care 4 fluff.
none the less, it was amazin!

yosei: that was just down right cute and sweet and very well written.
ambereyes: ditto.

Yeah! Bravo! Wonderful! Ok, let's see... Good fluff, good thought insite, good story. Two thumbs up!

wonderful story. loved it.

it was a great story, very fluffy...