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| Mercy 2005-04-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseHoly hell! This is so good! Please write more! Your writing ability is astounding! |
| Little QS 2004-04-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseO_O DAMN, this is good! |
| Hm 2003-10-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. I like your style of writing, it's very casual without being annoying. It's like being told a story. And you stuck to story details while putting in some of your own creative detail. Very good. :D |
| The Allanx 2003-10-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely... excellent. A sensible backstory fanfiction is a rare sight. I'd love to see more of this! :D |
| Reeve 2003-09-21 ch 1, | abuseIn keeping with the spirit of the anime, I felt a certain obligation to play up GAINAX references for this prequel. This includes the idea of having each "episode" specifically reference certain GAINAX works; for this one it was Gunbuster and Evangelion. And, like the anime, I think "Lefteye" will be all the more coherant in its completed form. At any rate, thanks for reading! |
| Nasinnet 2003-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abusethough it's a good story, and i like your speculations, i think that the only real detractor was your "Ayanami Ray". Being an Eva fan myself, the referance sounded kind of thrown in. If i had not known about Eva, (and yes, there ARE people who don't) then the reference sounds as bad as when science fiction writers just put the word space in front of everything. I do like the story overall. |
| EliD 2003-08-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh, that was... interesting... and I'm hungry. |