Thats pretty good for a test story but i like ur sailor moon fanfics better!

umm... interesting story
although i'm going to have to report you to the assosiation of frog abusers.

(cackle) Looks like the little girl doesn't take rejection well. Yeah, that was really good, especially for a five minute story.

Intriguing. You should use it as a basis for a longer story, could be interesting.

Dil

I'm surprised you did this in five minutes...not bad at all. I don't know if you've ever read the actual Grimm's fairy tales but your story is surprisingly similar to them in tone and style, which is pretty cool. The bit about the frog gave it an authentic fairy tale kick...remember, fairy tales weren't originally meant for children, and the evil witch/king/sister/step mother usually died a violent and horrible death. ;)

That was pretty good for a test story. It sounds like something you'd tell a kid to get them to go to bed...which is good. (Keeps them entertained and satisfied.) I liked it.

-Deadly

P.S. If you like Harry Potter, please R&R Clash of the Guitars by WickedLee. We both are working on it and in your story you said you were a metal head, so I thought you might like it. If there's a band you wanna recomend, name them in your reveiw. Enjoy!

Yay! I wrote it and it's not half bad! The frog part's pretty gross but hey, it took less then 5 minutes, what do you expect?