I really like this 'cause I have always wanted Akira and Sai together and making Sai a girl is perfect! I love you for it! Yeah! Yayayyay!! Please update soon! Later.

thats was alsome , but I got pretty mad when you didn't make another chapter.Besides that that was off the hook keep writing because your doin good i loved it,Also Is hikaru and sai gonna get togther.Iwanna Know what gonna happen so bad.Just keep doin what you doin!Girl!

Congrats on writing your first fic! I know how that feels like since I started my very first fic about a month ago. =) And yes, Ichikawa refers to Touya as "Akira-kun."

You have an interesting premise. I suppose Sai's characterization will determine whether this story shines or not. ^^; For that, I have a couple of comments. I'm very surprised that Sai's classmates accepted her when she told them that she was "different." Maybe it's me, but if I was one of Sai's classmates. I would be afraid of her and probably stay away from her. Sai would probably be labelled a freak and an outcast.

In ch 2, Ichikawa referred to Sai as "onee-san." That's probably a mistake. "Imouto" is the correct word for younger sister. Also, instead of "site," I think you meant "sight."

Your description of Sai again surprised me. For someone who had no soul for a long time (who probably should be out of touch with pop culture and reality), she sure look up to date! Is that intentional? Sai's "hip" look doesn't quite mesh with her emotionless personality... I find that really disturbing.

I hope you're not offended by my comments, but I know I always liked it when people tell me something that I could chew on. Ganbatte ne! =)

I like it, but how old are you makeing the other charecters if Sai is 16? Are the others still 12-13? or are they older as well?
I like how you portay Sai, but she isn't really like the older Sai... Will she change?

very intriguing! please do tell me about your updates (if convenient) to beriath@yahoo.com. thanks! hope to read more of your story! ganbare!

YAY! I liked this when I first read it. Can't wait for more chappy! ^_^