Great plot and ideas, and it has a ton of potential, but seeing as it's been almost 9 years i'll go ahead and say it won't be updated anytime soon. It's a shame, but it's your story and you can do whatever you like with it.

Great story... deserves more reviews.

Would love to read more.

nice stuff, its hard to TELL that its a SI untill you get to the AN.

i would quite like to see more.

Well done keep it going!

That was cool.

A few minor spelling errors, but nothing major. Grammar seems up to par, and diction is very nice. The plot is amsuing, though I tend to like more explination as to why characters go OOC.

Of course, I could be called a hypocrite, but no matter. This good. I'm liking it. Keep it up, and I'll keep reading.

one more time is all I need,

Alexei Nikolaivich Seranov