aha that was so frikken great

ii loved iht

i read it all in one nite

it was too qood

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Cute story, but it really annoyed me when you put so many author's notes in-between the chapter. Somethings are just better left unsaid, and you can incorporate what your saying in the story, without using an author's note. Some of them you even put in the middle of a sentence, and when I saw the rest of the sentence, I forgot what the first part was and had to re-read. Just have maybe one author's note at the top and/or bottom, because I'm just going to say it now: don't put author's notes in the middle. It's ANNOYING and is DISTRACTING.

I also noticed that for pauses you put: ...

Erm, don't. It's better to WRITE THE SILENCE. I now in mangas there are the "..." but this isn't a manga. In writing, you need to write what you mean. Describe. He paused/she paused.

PS - I'm excited by how the boys think Kagome and Sango are old ladies. But they're wearing tight clothes. HA.

haha i actually asked my bio teacher when i read this the first time and it caused a realy long distraction in class

i loved it just make it more detail in chapter 8.

I loved this one so much, i have it saved on a disk. It's so romantic! I love the bit with Jakotsu as the gay cab driver; never would have thoguht about that.

ah! how dare you!*slap* i was kidding!*slap again*but i really need you to do me a fav. and write a story about sango and miroku and let it be a non- ending story
you know?
like that movie?
im sorry,
im obsessed, i know
but i cant help it
i like miroku.. and i LIKE him... im sorry, im like the worlds biggest cartoon lover EVER! i mean, i had a crush on aladdin and peter pan at one time, so yeah, i have no life, like not like a " no life" life, i just have a stupid kill me life yeah.. okay so... i still loved it *slap* k bye!

Wow. So I started reading this story thinking that I hadn't read it before... apparently I have. There are some typos, but I like the premise of it. Something tells me though that with the hyper-levels of Fiendish, following their conversations could be difficult at 6 am.

OMG! I totally LOVE this! I read your story "Snickers" on Yakusoku To Negai, but that was one of THE BEST stories I'd ever read! :D Hope you write more MiroSan AUs! (AUs are my fave kind of stories :D)

kawaii fic! im glad someoen actually, FINALLY made a good fic that was long and good about those two! ^.^

i think i know what clavicle is...but wtf

long time no see. its me badgurl136. its been a while.ever since i changed sn i had to get all my fav stories back.looks like i just found yours. keep up the good work.

Whats with you and underwear! God Lady! In that other story Snickers or something you put that underwear scene! Anyways just had to review.

ok, have have read this story all ready and it is very good i might add! but i just needed to add you to my favs. ^^

OMG!! Daft Punk is one of my favorite bands!! Digital Love is so catchy and sweet! I feel so bad for him though. "before I know it, this dream is all gone..." lol great chapter, I am reading ur story again!

I love it! Write more Sango and Miroku storieS! (Right after that i would have wrote if something was confusing to me, but nothing was!)