I really, really love your stories. I do have one issue, though, and I noticed it in the last one too. Elizabeth as a mother would be frantic if one of her children was in danger. She didn't seem too distraught in the last story when Ana had been taken prisoner, and NO mother would say it was okay if her son was in danger because she at least still had her husband and other child. If anything, she would be much more upset than Will.

Other than that, I think your stories are fantastic! It'll take me forever to read all of them, but I'll enjoy every minute. I've been searching for great fanfic and I just found a treasure trove.

Oh man, you are so good!

Oh my...even knowing that the next chapter is just a click away I'm still on pins and needles. Well done!

amazing. just...amazing. this story was so awesome...*goes to read the fourth*

ah...i really should go eat lunch...but i don't want to stop reading! *smacks evil people who hurt jack*
anyways...
awesome stories. i love this arc, it's so interesting...i hope you write more pirates stories :-)

I really enjoy the turns that the stories in this author's arc take. I also enjoy the brotherly relationship that Will and Jack have in these stories; I just KNOW that they recover this feeling in the third Pirates movie. Thanks for some GREAT writing!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY!

"It must qualify as one of the strangest families in the world . . .but it was also the best anyone could ever hope to know."

I completely and utterly agree, Captain. Have a good life, mate.
Fair winds and a following sea, lad. You've earned it.

Atlast, Jack has returned to the sea, right where he belongs. It may not be the Pearl, but you can't have everything. Life is funny that way...

O...
So ol' Norrie's watching out for Brian, eh? Good man...

O.O
NO.
NO!
Not the kids!! NO WAY in HELL!
OH GAHD!

Ah... Feeling your oats now Michael? It's a little late you know. Once Jack's got it in for you, he won't stop until you're dead. And Jack? Well, he's got luck and several allies on his side, while you, my poisonous freind, have none at all. So, I'd say, settle your debts and skedaddle, if you value your life, you mangy traitorous mongrel-born piece of putreific slime!

...
Heheh. I've always wanted to say that...

Go on Jack-man. You deserve a little 'fun'. Heheheheh...

"One way or another, Hallson was going to pay for what he had done, to the Captain, to Robert, to the child, hell, even to the pirate woman. He was definitely going to pay."
SO true, even if I have to geld him myself!!

PS.
I hope Jack is really okay by the end of this...
:prays to GOD:
Pleaseohpleaseohplease let Jack be alright. Don't let Death take 'im. PLEASE!!

WOOHO!! Jack is ALIVE! YAHO!