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| niichan626 2005-05-15 ch 1, | abuseYour right, it does need a prequel... and a Sequel. I'll be waiting |
| Wai - Aki 2003-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, I like it a lot. This Ken would fit very well with the Gluhen timeline. *sighs* Who isn't a cynic these days? - Wai |
| Cheeseburger of Doom 2003-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI actually really liked this. I saw the summary and it said FarfiexKen and I went "ew gross" but I clicked on it anyway...And I really liked it! I liked the descriptive parts and I liked how Farfie acted and I really enjoyed Ken's angst! (Farfie is my favorite character -- does that make me weird?) Good fic! |
| Kyra2 2003-08-30 ch 1, | abuseI happen to like your version of Farfie. After all, just because someone is insane doesn't mean they have to be incomprehensible. He's not stupid, just crazy. Oh...and it's spelled Farfarello, not Farfello. |
| Mikun 2003-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseActually, Farfarello was really in character, because, now that I think of it, Farfarello in the series and in the manga was never a 'raving frothing' lunatic. He's actually more of the quiet type of crazy out of battle. It's only when he's confronted by or given the oppertunity to fight does he become 'Berserker'. I think everyone forgets that everytime we hear of a character is insane. So yeah, thumbs up on ICness! I'd read if ya wrote more ^_^. |
| kouryuu 2003-08-28 ch 1, | abuseo.O i never thought to read a fanfic in which ken is semi-likable. *lauds and adores* and yes, the characterization/plot was sketchy, but it makes the story fresh and crisp. *enjoied muches* *prods u for ur original ficcies* |
| Lady Kickass 2003-08-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Keep writing. |
| Fahm 2003-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI didn't think they were that OOC. I don't feel Farfarello is nearly as insane as he's usually written, your characterization could have stood be itself without the medication excuse, and Ken certainly has a lot to angst about. He's usually ignored in favor of Aya and Omi angst. There were a couple of things though... It's Farfarello with two far's. If you listen to the sub though, there are times when it sounds like he's being called Farfello. I'm not sure if it's because of accents or not, but it annoys me. Granted I haven't read the manga but I don't think Farfarello has ever been called Beserker. How would Ken know to call him that? Good job though otherwise. It's rare to read a Farf/Ken fic in which they're not trying to kill each other. |
| sugarmonkey 2003-08-26 ch 1, | abusegood fic when farfie said “We’re much alike, you and I.” i flashed back to Austin Powers lol well ja |
| Misura 2003-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI think this kind of fic is called a 'vignette'? (Not sure about this ; sorry if it insults you). It's true that, as you said, there wasn't much development, but the main point of the story wasn't the story but rather the drawing of a set of scenes with words (whoops, sorry if that sounds freakish). What I mean is that this was very enjoyable to read in part *because* things were sketchy. You described a situation rather than a chain of events, and did so in a highly enjoyable way. I hope you'll write many more fics like this one. ^-^ |