 JoAnn13 2003-08-30 . chapter 1GAsp! how can he NOT know!?!?!? update soon! |
 sunne1 2003-08-30 . chapter 1 Very good.
I look forward to see what happens next.
I really liked how "real" (for lack of a better word) this story read. Very well done. |
 tascha 2003-08-29 . chapter 1I don't know really if you should go on... As for one thing I actually do not really know what it is about... I am from Germany, having only seen the first season for now so I do not know what happened in telling...
But I think you're a very talented writer, I love how you can display all these emotions with words... Sometimes I have the feeling as I am reading a beautifoul poem while reading one of your parts, especially that one... So as for a poem it would be enough... But as I am one of these ALIAS addicts, please do write some more :)
Many hugz,
+tascha+ |
 Yostamaca 2003-08-28 . chapter 1 Hey, sweetie, sorry it's been so long. I'm seriously typing this in my typing class instead of doing my work. *shrug*
Reading the new story, I gotta say it's fabulous. I love it! Keep it up, and I hope I can stop by more often.
A month and a day left til the new Alias! |
 Leo's l'il sista 2003-08-26 . chapter 1 New fic? dang! keep up the good work! lataz, KRis |
 kittyfantastico 2003-08-26 . chapter 1I'd love more, I'd always love more of anything written by you because it's always good, but honestly? I don't think we really *need* more. That's a good ending, and the whole thing is just perfect as it is - like a little tiny insight into their emotions, but sometimes a tiny bit is just the right amount.
As it is, it's great, but maybe if you carried it on it'd turn into just another post-The Telling fic. Or it could turn into something really outstanding, like An Undefinable Sweetness was. Who knows!
Basically, if you write, I'll read; if you don't, that's your descision. |
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