|Reviews for Babies and Glue|
| Cece2 9/26/03 . chapter 1
I think that the dialogue of the characters are a little out of their character. The situation is pretty good, but the characters are a little off. And it kind of jumps around a little bit too much. And Elliot and Dennis are WAY out of character. Sorry, it's okay, but needs a little work.
| Beth 8/31/03 . chapter 1
Umm. The story moves too quickly. Try to add more detail.
| lucifer's lush lover 8/27/03 . chapter 1
Wow honey, that was a fantastic fic! I think you could really go far with it, but if you're leaving it like that it's still good!