Beautiful, beautiful little ficlet. I love the comparisons you draw between Oriya and Tatsumi, and the fact that Oriya is in it at all... I love Oriya, and he's a fascinating character, but difficult, I think, to capture, but you've nailed him. I hope you write more!

I think it's awesome that you managed to express such great characterization in so few words. Good job!

Very well written! =) Interesting choice of characters, effective and efficient dialogues. Creative and catchy till the end. ^_^ Like it!

Wow. More and More Oriya fics nowadays. I'm going to have to write one soon or be left behind. I really love this character. He's one of my favorite. Also, I like your portryal of Tatsumi's honors. Cheers! It was a good fic. Too short. More Oriya. Oriya/Muraki rules!

Er. Yes. Sorry. Its some ungodly hour of morning. Good night.
Kage Chikara, Child Of Shadows