interesting! i love your story!

Just finished the entire thing in one setting and I hav to say, great job. Alot of it kinda reminded me of the book 'Lovely Bones'. How she watched over her family as they grieved and had a chance to be with the boy she loved. You write very well and I look foward to reading more of your stories in the future.

Beautiful story but just one suggestion at the end have tomoyo wake out and find it was just a dream

At the very end, I was crying and smiling at the same time. Oh gosh, I loved it!

I am crying, and everyone at school is wonedring why. it was beautiful, sad, and I loved it. I originally came because of the promise of ExT, but I just don't care anymore. What a beautiful story!

Your story's going great! I like it so much. And I wanted to cry when they were asking Sakura and the two boys. I think that losing someone who is friends with everyone is sad. I love the serious and mournful way you wrote it. I feel grief seeping into my heart

I don't blame you for loving this fic. It's got a great premise, wonderful storyline, nice characters, and very good writing. Angst is very hard to perfect and I can say that it's very perfect in your case. Syaoran's very realistic here. I think he would be hit a lot coz Tomoyo's like a sister to him..

Poor Sakura-chan... She's got it hard. I would've lost my will if it was my best friend. And everything's so sad and angsty. i love the way you write. you bring out emotions very well and i admit that i've cried so much already

Mothers do have a weird sixth sense when it comes to their children... Anyway, the saddest chapter yet in your story. I cried with Sonomi when the news was broken. I think i wouldnt have enough courage to go on if my only daughter died... and her friends arent holding up well either. nice work though

You described death beautifully. It was so reasonable I won't be surprised if it was like that in the afterlife. Hmm, Tomoyo's reactions sound just like the ones that one might get if he/she found out that he/she just died. Your character seems nice and cool. And I cried when Tomoyo watched her death.. it was so sad

i wonder what happened. your descriptions and detailed imagery are very nice. i can imagine what it's like to be in Tomoyo's head. Your characters are very realistic. And the way you wrote it is really good.

One word. Excellent. I'm crying...its so good.

huwaw! this story is so touchy... i'm touched and i coudn't help wondering how would people react if i'm in tomoyo's place... hm... maybe my mom won't care, she didn't give a damn anyway, so i conclude that few trusted friends will the only persons who will remember me... o wel... all in all, this is a great story indeed...

the funeral and the tour scene are somewhat similar to the old movie "What Dreams May Come"... i like that movie, and i like your story too... o well, better keep reading... _

This story was so...SAD! Do you know how many times I cried? I was practically bawling. (Like a BABY) You're an amazing writer. I knew this would be a great story!

I'm just a sucker for sad, tragedy, stories. This one is the best one ever. Beautifully written.