I would just like to say, you have a great story here and from the look/writing on your profile you don't like it much and you seem to think it was nothing.

You should think more of your work. Even tho It is old and not prefect writing, it's good and I enjoyed it. where would most authers be if all they thought of their work as nothing important.(some probably do)

I just think you should at least feel proud about this story if nothing else on FanF is worth it. ;)

(oh and as for the story wats the reason to be a critic if your over FanF any way)

~Tanzi~

ok i liked the story but you could have made it a little more spaced ou in some spots.like at the end its all squished together. give it some space dude.oh and make it so you can follow who says wat easier. great bye

this so awsome it's scary i love it

i love it so far ,must read the rest

that was an amazing story.
was really heartfelt I loved it.
:)

i know i tell every story that i finish it is the best but your is no kiding.

LOVE IT

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH I COULD NOT EVEN TAKE TIME TO REVIEW IT. LAST CHAP HERE I COME

I LOVE YOURE STORY INCLUDING THE ENDING WHEN I GRAGUATE FROM HIGH SCHOOL I WILL HAVE A FUN PARTY LIKE THAT. OH and as I said before I LOVED YOURE STORY SINCERLY, STORM FOIX

i love this story so far on to next chap

i just love this story i read it again and again

YAY,MY FAV. PAIRING IS BACK TOGETHER!SQEAUL!I.LOVE.THIS.STORY.CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.You know this kind of reminds me of Passions with Kagura as Gwen,Rin as Teresa,and Sesshomaru as Ethan (though he's not as blind and DENSE as Ethan).I guess that's another reason why I love htis story so much.It's like it's its own sope opera.I LOVE.You and your story are on my favs list.Until next time.^_^ XP

I HATE KAGURA!That SKANKY BIOTCH BETTE RBACK OFF OF MY RIN-CHAN'S MAN.OR MOMMY'S GONNA HAVE TO ATEP IN.Sorry but I had to get that off my chest.Another pairing I hate is Sessh/Kag,I mean YUCK!She doesn't fit with the all mighty Sesshomaru-sama.I hate Kagome with a passion.Well,mabye not with a passion,but I still hate her nontheless.She REALLY erks my nerves.Love the story,keep up that excellent work.You were born to be an author.ESPACIALLY for some of my fav.pairings:Sessh/Rin,Jak/Ban,San/Mir,and Koga/Aya.I LIKE Inu/Kags,I think they're...c-cute,but thy're not one of my favs.

AW!Father/Son bonding.Ain't it precious.I like the description of your fish.A unique fish for a unique author.^_^ XP

Brilliant as always.I think the whole "Yes Milord!" thing is extremely adorable.Heck,I think RIN is extremely adorable.Hence the penname.Love the story.^_^ XP

AW!I love th elittle Hakudoshi,he seems so innocent and harmless i just want to squeeze him.I'm REALLY,REALLY,REALLY SORRY that I didn't review the othe rchaps.I sometimes like to see wether or not I'm going to like the story by reading a couple of chapters,and if I DO think I will like it,I review.I also sometimes forget or don't have the time because I get so caught up in the story that I just go on to the next chappy.Sorry.I understand if you hate me.I still love your story though.Just to let you know,I LOVE THE PAIRONGS.Jak/Ban is a REALLY ADORABLE COUPLE.I'm a DEFINITE Rin/Sessh fan.You know,with some of the coments you make,you remind me a lot of myself because I find myself saying almost the same things that you do.It's like we're twins or something.Your AWESOME!KEEP UP YOUR FASCINATING WORK!^_^ XP