This story is great. You've done a good job with the layout and everything. Also, it goes at just the right speed - except for one part. I think that the revelation of Caden being Sephiroth's clone came in a little early, but it's not too bad. Also, check your homonyms: You used "here" instead of "hear" in one of the paragraphs, I can't remember which one. There are some others as well. You're idea is really good though, and I look forward to many more chapters. Keep up the good work.

Hurry up and finish this, Aquila! I was into it, and then it ended! Need...read...more... Great story, though!

Harrah! You finally updated! Nice way you put in Norse mythology in there. Looks like MArlene spent way too much time with good ol' Pa. Please update quickly! Well as quickly as you can.

Interesting developments. A bit rushed, but that can be fixed after the story gets told. I'll read more later.

Hmm...very interesting. I definitely like Caden, he's a great character. Normally I can't stand when Cloud and Tifa get together, but I'll forgive you since this isn't a CloTi. Otherwise a great beginning, and I'll read more soon.

I felt bad because you had so many chapters and nobody was reading, but you make your character's emotions too obvious. It sounds like they should be in a witty or cynical piece, not something serious...

Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! Your sense of humor is in the right places at the right times. I think not many people are reviewing 'cause you have the anonymous reviewers blocked. I'm adding you and this fic on my favorites list.