Reviews for Five Things that Never Happened to Dawn

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The Cardboard Moon 2008-04-21 ch 3,	abusegrins evilly nice. >:D I kinda wanna read this chapter as a full story. That'd be amazing... -Tamora, the Cardboard Moon
WhatWeDo 2007-04-17 ch 5,	abuseI never considered that they might have given Dawn to Faith, as that slayer's sister. "That Buffy had chosen her death, as she'd never chosen her life." - This sentence is perfect. Ultimate perfection. I bow down to this sentence. And another perfect sentence is: "Good old Sunnydale. You know, I don't think they ever really appreciated me here." The Junior Watcher chapter was so sad! Wow, you really explored different possibilities! You're very creative. I love the wording of 'buried by the earth and sea.' So sad. But then, you make everything alright. And I love you for it. This is really wonderful writing. - Jessica (Please check out my homepage if you'd like to write in a Buffyverse group, as a canon or original character!)
Mousewolf 2005-08-27 ch 5,	abuseWhoa. C'est tres bon.
Roony 2005-05-16 ch 3,	abuseman, I like all of these. #3's my fav though (blush guiltily) and #4 is second fav, so.. excellant job here! You never disappoint!
RosieW 2004-12-15 ch 5,	abuseThis was so amazing! I've read a heap of these from many different fandoms I this was one of the best, I loved the different situations that you came up with and how you kept everyone so much in-character. This first was was so excellent and most likely my favourite, the second one was so very sad and very nicely written, the third one was kind of creepy - but in a good way, the forth one was just... wow, so different and elegantly put and the last one was both amusing and wonderful. Loved them all muchly.
Just Wolf 2004-11-19 ch 5,	abuseI think I might've preferred this if I wasn't still in gaping-mouthed amazement at how brillaint the alst chapter was. It's hard to see this in the same light, because the standard of that was so high. Some of your descriptiosn here were good, I loved how you conveyed Dawn's pain, but some of the earlier descriptions bothered me, seeming not improtant to the story you were telling. But still, in general this was a truly excellent fic. well done!
Just Wolf 2004-11-19 ch 4,	abuseI wasn't sure about your writing skills because of the slightly off first chapter but now... colour me stuned! I'm amazed. That was intense, powerful, I loved the strength and depth youg ave Dawn's character... what she did to Spike was so terrible and so good at them same time. You wrote this so skillfully, I could really feel with Dawn and Spike. Their characters were very well potrayed. And the ending was beautiful, dark and intense. The breath 'in out' was a great touch. Gave it an extra layer of reality.
Just Wolf 2004-11-19 ch 3,	abuseOoh. Now that was fun. I really want to read more of it somehow it was just so brillaint to read. Hilarious and quirky and with jsut the right amount of aU. You're chracters were really in character too. Even Spike, which no one ever seems to manage.
Just Wolf 2004-11-19 ch 2,	abuseWow. That was very powerful and beautiful. I liked how it worked. i've never seen it doen before. You're attention to detial was excellent here, i mean in your descriptions.
Just Wolf 2004-11-19 ch 1,	abuseI thought you used a little too much pointless detail here - but I suppose that was part of the premsie - and the ending, whcih was very funny, mroe than made up for it.
SRoni 2004-10-27 ch 5,	abuseYou know, I've liked your stories in the past, the few I was able to get my hands on. I really liked this. All of it was something I could see happening. Doesn't mean I like all of them, but they all could have happened. Great job. I know I'm supposed to find something to critique, but I honestly couldn't change it to make it better. (Which is saying something, because most of the time when I read fanfic, I'm either thinking Oh God, make it stop, or I could do better than that.) Thank you for the thoroughly enjoyable story.
rhia 2004-09-24 ch 5, anon.	abusesome very cool stories
Metropolis-Rising 2004-09-10 ch 5,	abuseThat was an interesting fic. Light hearted at first, ithink I enjoyed the way it leaned towards the dramatic towards the end. The fouth chapter was upsetting, but only in the fact that i haven't seen all of seventh season and I would hate to think that Giles would let Ripper out that much. And beyond that the intense darkness that i think it would cause Dawn in the long run isn't worth the prize in my estemation. Of course, Dawn wouldn't have to live very long with the darkness since the bloody world would die just because Spike wouldn't be there.
The Mediocre Gatsby 2004-07-17 ch 5,	abuseOh. Wow. Just . . . Wow. These were awesome. Everything about them. My favorite was number four. It was heart-wrenching but not rediculously so. And all of these, they are so completely possible . . . Gah. Sorry about the pointless review. --Uoko, wasting your time and only feeling slightly apologetic about it.
Dreamiflame 2004-06-18 ch 5,	abuseYours is the second Five Things I've read for Dawn, and I'm reasonably sure they don't really overlap. It's kind of amazing just how many things could have changed, with just a little nudge. Most of these hurt like whoa, especially the third and fourth ones. The second one was heart-breaking, too, but in a good way, and the first one was funny. Poor Dawn and Faith, having to put up with each other. The fifth one is just different, but excellent, as they all are. Wonderful take on Dawn.

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