aw! i want to read more. are you going to write more because i really want to know what hasppens next...thankz

moni

I've been really wanted to read Forgotten Paradise...did ffn delete it or something? Could you send it to me or tell me where to find it?

ugh, this is very hard to read. I'm lost half of the time with the dialogue, they should be spaced out a little more.

Remember, when someone talks it starts a new paragraph.

Oh my gosh! U r so good at this! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Can't wait for the other chapters!

I really hope you writte more this story is great please hurry up with the next chapter

WHAT THE HELL! I CAN'T FIND FORGOTTEN PARADISE! ROAR!

MESSAGE ME IF YOU HAVE IT UP!

wow great story!

this is a good story cant wait for chapter luck writing it.

Okay, I read your story. I like the idea how you got them together Kaka/Saku, but are you still going to continue? I mean it's almost going to be like 1 or 2 yrs? Like I said, I hope you still continue cuz the readers are dying to know what happen next. If not, you should at least write setting saying that you won't continue. Anyways, I hope to see you and write again.

*gasp!* Continue soon! I don't like Hideaki! Make your chapters longer! .

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! I NEED TO SEE THAT HIDEAKI BASTARD FALL AT THE HANDS OF KAKSHI!

AWSOME STORY!

(ps: i really like the element room thing u've got goin on _)

-sorry if there are lots of wrong grammars here, i'm indonesian highschool girl, and i have to admit, i'm not really good at english-

i've read all your fics. Kakashi -sakura is one of my favourite pairings, i really like those kakashi-sakura fics ('forbidden fruit', 'forgotten paradise', & 'forever yours'. and i also like 'Operation: Scare Sakura', even if you said it was your first fic).

But maybe (just my own opinion) in your fics, sasuke & kakashi is too emotional... (i don't really know the though, 'cause the newest Naruto manga in my country is Vol.2...*sob*)

Anyway, why did you stop at chapter 17? Why don't you make an ending/sequel for this fic? (wether it'll be happy or angst, it's up to you, but i prefer the happy one)..

So...*kneeling in front of you, crying & begging*

Could you continue this kakashi-sakura fic, please? Pretty please?

I'll be waiting...

Impatiently...

*angelic grin*(do angels grin? duh!)

very good! update soon, ok?

Very cool. I love this series._ Please continue soon!

YAAY! kakashi to the rescue! D i want more lemon. haha. x.o sorry.