Very good character description VERY! I love Oriya hehe

Wow. That really was amazing. I'm smiling alot now, even though it wasn't really...sweet in the normal sense of the word. Don't you love Oriya?! I love him so much and you capture him very, very well!! Please, please write more. I'll keep reviewing happily. I really enjoy these short fics. In fact, I feel an urge to write now! Thanks for making me squeal, if only mentally (it might have scared my friend if I'd done it outloud.)

Nice one, too, though I like Tatsumi and Oriya's interaction better. ^_^ I particularly like how Oriya's anger vanished at the sight of Muraki's weakness (did I interpret that part correctly?) -- that is touching. I think I despise Muraki more for what he did to Oriya than to Tsuzuki or Hisoka. :'|

Wondering if you have more sequels in mind? I'd love to read on.

Again, nice characterization! I hope to see more Yami no Matsuei fics from you in the future! ^_^