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| Lollie81 2004-05-29 ch 24,  | abuseHello!! Very beautiful story, sorry if I read it only now... however good work! |
| Lil' Moony and Lil' Padfoot 2004-02-24 ch 5, | abuseGood story so far. There was just one thing I disagreed with. Aren't the X7s the ones with hive minds? That would mean they couldn't talk to the X6s or anything. Well, I'll keep on R&Ring! |
| Krit2000 2003-10-10 ch 24, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed this piece. Keep up the good work |
| catherder 2003-09-24 ch 24, anon. | abuseI can't begin to tell you how much I have enjoyed this. You have come up with an original, interesting character and a good plot, as well as kept the DA characters in character. I applaud your efforts. Please keep up the good work. |
| Northern Star2 2003-09-24 ch 24, anon. | abuseHeh, I should beg people not to read MY old stuff. Seriously, yours was still good... But mine *chokes*... I've really enjoyed this story and hope you write more of this.. Serious-y stuff... Jessie :D |
| Nonnie 2003-09-23 ch 24, anon. | abuseI really liked your story. I waiting until you had completed it to start reading. I couldn't put it down. Even though you were "light" on the M/L you did a darn good job. They were so sweet at the end. I miss Max and Logan more than anything right now and I was never a shipper. You write characters well and I hope to see more of your work. |
| ann 2003-09-23 ch 23, anon. | abuseThamks for this great story..it's nice to read some series 2 type fiction for a change and this was really well thought out. Nice characterisation too |
| Iris 2003-09-21 ch 23, anon. | abuseI just wanted to thank you for an interesting storyline. Thanks also for writing some Max and Logan. Can never get enough of that couple. |
| Cinnamon 2003-09-20 ch 22, anon. | abuseThe best thing you wrote, well after the Max and Logan parts, was killing the familiars. Thanks for that. It's one of the reasons that Wyldegod is so good is because he kills when he has to and if the story demands it. Keep those chapters coming. |
| Northern Star2 2003-09-19 ch 21, anon. | abuseIs it wrong to assume Max is in deep trouble? Heh, I guess not huh? I love this fic, and I can't wai till the next chapter :D. Jessietjuh |
| venus 2003-09-19 ch 21, anon. | abuseExciting story. You write action well. Thanks for the light Max and Logan. Better than no Max and Logan. |
| Alexis 2003-09-18 ch 19, anon. | abuseI really like this story a lot and look forward to it. Thanks to you, Star24 and the Peking Noodle I have something to read. Keep up the good work. |
| catherder 2003-09-17 ch 19, anon. | abuseOOh, the plot thickens. Have I told you how much I'm enjoying this? AAron is an interesting, original character. I like the way he interacts wiht MAx and the others, becoming more and more human and experiencing human feelings. Good work. |
| Ty3 2003-09-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseOOps, I'm dumb. I meant 8. Was White 8? |
| Ty3 2003-09-17 ch 19, anon. | abuseStill an awesome story. I love it. I like how AAron develops slowly over time into a real person and not just a Q and A robot. I can't believe that Orion was killed. How will TJ and Spring deal? This story is one of my favorites and I hope you keep updating as quick as you have been. The only thing I would say is a little weird about this story is the assassination of White. That confused me a little. Was White 14? What happened with that? |