i can't believe that you stopped writing there. i cant wait to read the rest.

Oooo... I'm loving this story... please update soon! Oh, and is there going to be any romance(hopefully) in the story?

:)

i loved all of the chapters, great ending, just one question... you're gonna keep writing this, right?

great job!

... Oh, dear. You brought Matt into this? Eeek! Poor guy - his friendship with Logan will eventually kill him. *laughs* Talk about choosing your friends wisely... Continue this! *writes the title down* This is good - very good. I'm psyched, and I want more. Wanna deliver? *grin*

one word: wow!

lol

Normal is so funny.

Please write more! This is good!

Come on do more

I've read this part on another site and was wondering when you were going to finish with it? It is a really good story, please hurry, you are driving me nuts! :)

Nice pacing, good use of Sketchy. When you didn't use a divider and changed settings, it was a little confusing, but I followed it fine. Thank you for sharing.

i bet there would be a cool sequel!

Would you please, please hurry and finish this story, you are driving me nuts! :)

I love this series! I love the idea another girl in Max's situation that nobody has any idea as of yet who and where's she's from and what she's doing.. You're a great writer! Keep it up! I wanna know what happens! :}

i like how you involved sketchy.. nice writing.. can't wait to read more of this story