Another GREAT work Denise! You truly got the idea of mutally unrequitted love conveyed quite well (and there can be many circumstances among couples who are both living in which this has to be the case ) . I also thought you did a good job of recreating how it might be like to momentarily die then come back to life! More stories from you, please!

This was such a beautiful, emotional story. It was nice to see the Captain and Mrs Muir have their moment. Even if it was only for a little while. Well done