That was so good! i love storys that just appear to be musings - they seem somewhat more natural in the writing. The mention of Lilly and Snape though... ew. after all, he hated her because she was a mudblood, didn't he? i'm not conviced of your characterization of Harry either, 'cause i'm not convinced he's going to try everything possible to save himself from dieing; but thats just my opinion. other than that it was a really good fic!

I love this story, but I have a question:

Why is Snape dying in the first place?

PLEASE email me w/ the answer, this is driving me crazy! :0

One-shot Snapefics ROCK, and this is certainly no exception. Your phrasing is awesome, the words really flow together. Excellent ending too, you kept the mood, and resisted the urge to let someone give Sevvie a hug. ;) Great job!

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Ok... This is amazing.

I love writing about Snape, and you got him absolutely perfect! I have every confidence that your story about the marauder's will be great! Keep up the good job )

I really like this fanfic, although I usually stay away from the ones that try to predict the future of Harry and the others. (this being only the second one I've read) Snape's character was absolutly perfect, I loved how you really showed what was going on in his mind.

I really liked this, you did a wonderful job with Snape, he's a difficult character to write, keep up the good work

I don't get it? But it's good LOL.

Good. Very Good.

I leave you with a box of cookies.

Wow.

I like it! Its really good, I love stories that sort of take place in the characters minds, which this one certainly does. You have a lot of talent as a writer, I love it. You should deffinetly write a longer Maureders story.

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