that was really good, write more. you really captured the characters. well done

Richard was far younger when he was shot. But good story. you need to make it more clear when theres a sceen change.

Well, Bruce said no more ROBIN. He never said ANYTHING about Nightwing, did he, now?

Gah, I choked up over this one.
God bless you.

This is perhaps my favorite Fiction for Batman and Robin. You excellently characterize both main characters and pull me in just as much as any movie, show, or comic did. Wonderful job!

Wow... It's so great! Words can't describe!

A powerful story... a fantastic read... I expected no less from Syl. :)

This story was terrific and nicely detailed! Dick is so cute! It was well written and wonderful. Nice job Syl, you never cease to amaze. o.o