Its been a long while since I have played and beaten megaman X4 but I do remember the characters. I think you kept Iris in character and I like this one-shot piece of yours very much _ I like the way the story was set up. I know this fanfic is old but I believe you have good talent. _ Nice work!

1 WORD...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!Please write more! Ops! Thats more than word.

Very good but they're reploids so they are more human then mere robots.

That was great. You captured Iris's conflicting emotions really well. I just wish this fic were longer.

Good story! _ Very nice concepts of boths sides.

Aw, that was short, but sweet. I think you captured her charater greatly. Maybe you can do like a series off of this, like go into other people reflecting on themselves before something like this. (ex. How Zero felt after he killed Iris)

*SHOCK* OMG WRITE MORE! Iris is sweet and love with Zero but WOW _ You MUST write more!

Mmmn. I like the format you chose; very conducive to a reflective character-centered piece like this one. A warning, though-from one who loves writing character-based fics to another-take care that it's not merely 'an essay upon my emotions' of sorts. This kind of format is equally conducive to reducing the story to a sort of compare/contrast chart, demeaning the emotion you're seeking to represent. Still, it's well-written, grammatically correct, and free of errors-at least, so far as I can see. :)

why did I have 2 die? I LOVE ZERO! goodbye friends. I go off to a betta place...

It's beautiful. :) And you're one of the few whose writing flows well and with good formatting too, at that.

LOVE THIS FIC¡ (-)

why u dont make more fics like this please.

and zero x X fics SUCKS¡ P

Your fanfic is AWESOME! I really like how you describe and rate your fanfictions.

zero and iris RULES and yaoi DROOL¡

can u make a romantic fic about zero x iris they make a cute couple and they are proof in mmx5 that zero still love her.

TAKE THAT YAOI FANS PEOPLE¡

Although I've never played the actual game myself, the thoughts running through Iris' mind are similar to what a friend of mine would have described her. An excellent piece, please keep up the good work!

GREAT!

AWESOME!