Hey, that was excellent. It was also, I think, original. I mean, the story of how Tortall was started isn't original, but the slaves escaping thing is. I think you ought to continue this. It's really great. I have a story about Tortall's history, too. The first couple of chapters explains my version of how Tortall was started. If you want to read it, you're more than welcome to. (*hint, hint, reviews welcome, too, hint, hint*) Your story was very creative. Just one question, what does B.F. stand for? Oh, another question/comment. I like your day names, how did you come up with them? Keep writing!!

That was great.

hey ana, funni but isnt jonothan like the second, that sa long time for noone to b named jonathan, oh and thsi is irrelevent but people all of a sudden just stopped reading my storys, and reveiwing, the fourth chapter has no reviews and its been on for ever, and i have a stalker, ttyl
~LoQ
former peachblossom

I like this...it's a really cool idea for a fanfic, and I like it. Keep coming up with stuff like this and I'll love you forever. ;) lol
Daine

That was SO great! I really liked it. Espically how he can't white very well and he dosn't think he can he king and all that. Very good!

Hey, not bad. I like it. You should keep writing this, it could be a great fic. Nice work, Ana!!
Much love to all,
-ladyknight

Hey, not bad. I like it. You should keep writing this, it could be a great fic. Nice work, Ana!!
Much love to all,
-ladyknight

aw promise is so cute? who's her father? u betta do sum explainin g2g (too much homework)

Ah, the Conte line. Though why it had to start with a Jonathan the First, I'll never know. Or perhaps you do. Or perhaps it's mentioned somewhere. *shrug*

Very good story, though it seems to come straight out the the Bible. Well, not straight out, but the whole slaves escaping and creating a new land of freedom and peace that we all know today. Only, not. For Tortall: wars. For the Isrealites: suicide bombers.

Eh, it was good anyway, well thought out and well written.

:oD