Reviews for That Brief Warmth

Reviews For: That Brief Warmth

loretta537 2007-09-11 ch 1,	abusethis was good as well.
Shiro Ryuu 2007-06-05 ch 1,	abusePfft, Hana and Haru?! Hee, that could be fun... pokes you Of course, you haven't written anything in over three years, so I suppose it's probably not going to happen... D'oi. Okay, I was distracted by the crackiness (?); where was I? Oh, yes. cackles uncontrollably Arisa has a lot of fun, doesn't she. lawl, I love it. I also love this bit: "Don't worry. She isn't going to hurt you. She promised." "She promised." "After I regained consciousness." "...ah." And I think the angstier bits were handled nicely too, not too overboard. There is always potential for lots of angst whenever Akito's name comes up, but I don't think I would really want to see too much of it in Arisa/Kyo. They're too hard-headed :D
Ayaka-san 2006-01-31 ch 1,	abuseYay! The continuation of the other story as usual I love it!^^ Sasaka12^_^
Gravaja Umbros 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseI already read your "On Names, the Flu, and Other Things" and then went on to read this. It's a great story, you should keep it up. I really look forward to future installments.
Nadee 2005-06-22 ch 1,	abuseIt's good =) Well done.
Grinning Cat 2005-06-18 ch 1,	abuseYeah, I liked this one as well. I hope you do more. ^_^
Cal reflector 2005-04-15 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good stuff. If this was by request, might I ask you to write more about this pair? If it wouldn't cause you too much trouble that is, and if you have an idea for another story. This is really good stuff, and I forgot to mention it last time, Kyo's line in the prequel to this story, "Prince Rat Bastard," that was gud.
Yume 2004-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseWould you... I mean, is there any way to make you write more? - I just love this Fanfiction about Arisa und Kyo of yours! Please go on with this one, I'd like to know what happens next to them. Yume
Ruby Moon 2004-05-02 ch 1, anon.	abusew00t w00t!! There are so few KyouUo fics as there are HanaHaru fics! Do experiment with HanaHaru, onegai itashimasu!!
Fluff Inc 2004-03-22 ch 1,	abusei love it! so cute and fluffy and everything^^
Mistress of Wolves 2004-03-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was good. Is it a one-shot or are you writing any more? Leaving it as a one-shot would be fine, but I do want to know what happens next. And, yay, I finally meet another Kyotani fan! Everyone I know who watches Fruits Basket is a damn Kyoru fan. Ugh. Oh, and you had no grammar or spelling mistakes or anything like that! Buen trabajo! Well, namarië! P.S. notices previously-unnoticed writing at bottom of page Oh, there is more! Yay! And it’s Yukiru, another good couple. (But not as good.) Or Hana and Haru? That I was not expecting . . . I could kinda see it, though . . .
THETWOTERRORS 2004-01-13 ch 1,	abusenaughty!
Tenniyo 2003-09-01 ch 1,	abuseHey, I like how it's lookin' so far. I like the pairings. Still, I don't see Uo or Hana being afraid. Of anything. Arisa looks like she could break Akito and be friends with Kagura...and Hana? Oi, I think she could scare Akito! XD ("Do you girls want to be BEEP by electric jolts" glowing eyes") But I still like how this is going. Nice work!
Maeko 2003-08-29 ch 1,	abuseScandalous!! Tee hee. An interesting way of telling how Arisa finds out... hee hee. I think your uncomplicated and straightforward style really managed to pin it without lacking anything emotionally. I do wonder why Uo would be nervous about meeting Kagura... I mean, I can think of a few reasons why she would be. Anyone reading this fic probably knows Uo can take almost anyone, so I don't think it's just the simple "I might get beaten up" fear. Anyway, I think there's something to explore there, but I did enjoy this fic muchly! I can't seem to write romance... I am trying, but I get nervous even writing it. This sounds so cheesy! [erase erase] Yeah, so, great job! I really like you work... ...even tho I was a bit scandalized by the content... hee hee ^_^

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