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Kirume 6/2/04 . chapter 1
SO good. gosh

P and i just thought that i would share this with you.

Mikagami literally means beautiful mirror if written in kanji then translated to chinese..

ok. that was dumb. but whatever. XP

O again, excellent work

-keiko
WordsAndDoodles 4/28/04 . chapter 1
er what can I say... It's too beautiful... can't find the right words to say. Well anyway I like it... very much! I just read your story... So I'm looking forward to your other projects..
Lady Penguin 9/20/03 . chapter 1
First things first, I would like to say... Kawai! How very, utterly cute! Your grammar does not lack, and in fact, it is much better than those whose language IS their first. I've only seen a few mistakes here and there, but it is perfectly understandable and the content of the story highly makes up for it.

The characters are in place, although in several parts, they lose their characterizations, but it's alright because hey, they're falling in love!

Overall, it's a very cute story and I enjoyed reading it!

L.Penguin
miki-chan 9/4/03 . chapter 1
WOW! I really really liked the last part where Mifuyu tells Tokiya to let go! It was so... i don't really know how to put it... it touches the heart at the right place, at the right time, making that paragraph just feels soo.. erm... right. I'm such a lousy reviewer, can't even express my opinions properly.

Anyways, I just loved your story! You grasped Tokiya's personality perfectly, and i didn't think it was ooc at all :) And i think he was really funny when he claimed the others were giving him a headache _

Do write more, and it'd be even more wonderful if you can manage a chaptered story, I have a feeling it's going to be great stuff! *wink

Bye! Keep writing!
Satsumi 9/4/03 . chapter 1
BWAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! Finally got my butt to it and reviewed! Not that you haven't got a good one already while sitting beside me as I was reading it, hehe. Admit it, I give you pretty good feedbacks, ne? But as common courtesy, i cannot NOT review! Especially since you gave me SUCH nice ones yourself! _

Heck this one was good, at least I thought it was, and you KNEW damn well I thought it was too, cos I've been bugging you for another one for AGES!

And you know what? If you JUST keep up the work a little bit more... I JUSST might turn into a Tofuu fan someday *winkz winkz* you never know! So what am I hinting? Hm... a chaptered one would be nice, hehe...

And man do I like the kissing part! Haha! Sure some peop might find it OOC but hey, the whole thing wouldn't have quite such the impact intended without a smooch-scene in the end!

Okay! Quick-quotes time! "he felt his sister’s soft caress, and heard her voice.

Let go…you should have…long time ago…"

BWAHAHHAHHAA! Man that was rich.

On one hand I find it touching and extremely compliments the situation, but one the other hand it's like Mifuyu was saying to her bro: "I never asked you to cling onto my death like some kind of leech! I've always wanted to tell you to get a life! Now finally you have one and I'm damn happy, cos now that you have a life I can rest in peace!"

Bwahhahahahahahhahahahaa! Good job ;)
linda 9/3/03 . chapter 1
oh, this a very nice story! *_* i like flame of recca very very much, and if you like tokiya in the anime you should read the manga cos he is very cute in there.

cheers, write more!
faeri lazy to sign in 9/3/03 . chapter 1
ne, i like your story! _ i noticed that you tend to be a bit poetic in your writing, which is cool, because it suits the mood of this story.

mikagamiXfuuko forever! write more, won't cha? *grinning*

faeri-san

p.s. you like hotohori? can i ask you to take up on that urge? i like him, too! _
Flare-Chaa 9/1/03 . chapter 1
Aw.. I hate getting emotional. Hmph! But oh well... THAT WAS SO SWET! _ Err.. Sorry, I just had to say that.. _ 'Dat was berry good! _ Write another one! Or maybe a sequel, yeah!
lingling 8/31/03 . chapter 1
this is my first read flame of recca feng zi [fuuko] and shui jing [mikagami] fiction. i like this one very much. i like feng zi and shui jing together. i think it is really sweet how shui jing letting go and loving feng zi. i think your writing is good. please write more stories. i want to read some good stories of feng zi and shui jing can you tell me where to find any.

i like the cartoon and comic of flame of recca very much. i also like lie huo [recca] and xiao liu [yanegi] so can you write story of them too?

sorry my english is not good i am from taiwan.

good luck and please e-mail me?
Lady Kai 8/31/03 . chapter 1
hey! you said your grammar sucks well it's not bad at all so don't worry about it _ anyway, i like the fic. very emotional and introspective. so...write more TOFU! *peace-sign!* don't let it be your last. if you wanna write something, write it! ja! *vanishes in a puff of smoke*
hokagerulez 8/31/03 . chapter 1
this is good! i love your fiction! i love tokiya and fuuko together...PLEASE CONTINUE? :)
lime 8/31/03 . chapter 1
woW! another great tofuu fic! the story is well-described and is full of emotions! good going! i hope you will write more tofuu fics! good luck!
sunny-june 8/30/03 . chapter 1
i really enjoyed reading your story...left this nice, fluffy feeling within me. hehe. your right, mikagami is just gorgeous, who wouldn't like him? _ if i am such a die-hard fan of fuuko-chan and her and mi-chan being together, i would want him for myself!

so you can see i am a huge ToFuu supporter, and your story is just great.

please don't let it be your last ToFuu, i really want to see more of your work. what about a chaptered one?

bye...
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