this fic is also good but i wish your chapters were longer

I really love this story! I'm not even that big a fan of Kurama/Botan, but I adore this fic! Just one thing, I wonder if you're aware that the first chapter is...well...missing in action. I remember reading this before and the first chapter started with the kids at school and what-not, now it just jumps right to Keiko unconciousness. Anyway, thought I'd let you knew in case you didn't already. I hope you can update this, I'd really love to see what happens next!

What happened to the the first chapter? This is the scond, are you revising or something?

*reads Vegeta's comment*

hm. Actually that isn't true, baby bro. I left cuz ** been happening to me for months. Who gives a ** for a flamer? Ah well, no harm done Vegeta.

I'm sad to tell you guys that Anemone, my older sister, isn't going to get back on Fanfiction anytime soon. Thanks to a certain somebody saying that she should spend time outside, she LITERALLY balled her eyes out. Because of this, she left and didn't tell you guys. I'm sorry you didn't get this earlier. I sorta stopped after a while, but after a few weeks, I got back in this and writing farther in my stories. So until then, lets hope she'll feel better about this and join back on.

You can't find it becaue he/she deleted that post. So, let's just be patient...

ARE yOU GONNA UPDATE ANYTIME SOON?!?!?!?!?!?!?

**knocks on screen** YO! Where'd ya go? I've been waiting since I found this story since forever ago, and you've still not updated. Whats up with THAT?
You've got a GREAT story here, so why haven't you updated it since March?
Cathy @~;~

All right.. I've finally finished your other story and I'm here! But where'd you go?!! You seriously need to update here... it's been 8 months! Please! Please! Please?! BTW, I really like your story! (Duh)

Would you pretty please update this soon. I've been in suspense for three months, and I can bearly take it anymore. I've read and re-read this and 'From the Fox's Eyes' about three time and I love them both. Please update! PLEASE, my sanity depends on it!

I love this story! So much!
i like Ai the best, prolly becuz Kurama is my fav in yuyu. any way keep writing. i liked the part when Koenma changed their clothes, especially Ai.

Please update soon. And give Kisho a cool outfit too.

Please update this soon.

My fav. part was Kisho, but I do hope that he will get a cool outfit like the others. ^_^

I liked the part with the book and the quote, this is a great story, but I have one question. IF YOU'RE THIS GOOD AT WRITING, WHAT ARE YOU DOING WRITING FANFICS!? You should be writing novels if you have this kind of talent. Anyway update soon!

I loved it! The flashbacks were so cool and heart-touching. It makes you want to melt into a swooning puddle on the floor! I especially liked the part after Boton's flashback, when it said 'fear fearing to approach them.' AND KISHO'S OKAY! HOORAY! I was really worried about him there. Anyway, I really, really, REALLY love this story. Update as soon as you can!