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| Yoseph 2008-04-28 ch 2,  | abuseHey, what happened to Miranda? |
| neverlookback 2003-12-27 ch 3, | abuseI love your story ! I'm gonna read the rest later on...just thought I'd submit a quick review. -n |
| Uri-chan 2003-12-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseAhh! I can't bother signing in. Anyways! Nice chapters!! I like it! Update it soon, k? |
| Flood slayer 2003-09-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseWhao wicked chap. Keep on writing I'm Looking Forward to your next chapters Sis. |
| Flood slayer 2003-09-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseWhao wicked chap. Keep on writing I'm Looking Forward to your next chapters Sis. |
| Flood slayer 2003-09-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseDude awesomeass story bro keep writing more. I wonder if you are going to put Keyes wife in 343 guilty spark? |
| Ragma 2003-09-03 ch 1, | abuseHey I told you that people would enjoy your story as much as I did. Keep it up. I want to see the next chapter. |
| Lt. Garry 2003-09-02 ch 2, | abuseThanks for the reviews. I'm glad you like it. Even though I haven't written that far, I can say you'll be surprised by the way things work out in "Keyes." And I've been working out my ending ever since I started the story...I won't say anything about it. As far as updating soon, I can get the rest of the fourth chapter up hopefully by the end of the week, and that goes for the first part of chapter five, too. But I need some time for the rest. |
| B. R. Wells 2003-09-01 ch 5, | abuseowowowowow |
| B. R. Wells 2003-09-01 ch 4, | abusewhoa, thats right, lt is higher than a warrent off., even in air command |
| B. R. Wells 2003-09-01 ch 3, | abuseoh, cool |
| B. R. Wells 2003-09-01 ch 2, | abuseso he had the hots for his futre... wierd! |
| B. R. Wells 2003-09-01 ch 1, | abuseoohwoowow |
| Uri-chan 2003-09-01 ch 5, | abuseThis is an interesting fic. It's very original. Not many I've read have Dr. Halsey and Keyes together. I like the idea though. I wanna know what happens in 'Keyes,' the stage. That chapter will be interesting. I'd like to see how Jacob Keyes, Jr. reacts to it. It is his POV. Get real deep and emotional at that part but not too much. The ending would be good as well. Kudos to this fic. I'm gonna put it on my fav. ^_^ |
| Libracross 2003-09-01 ch 5, | abuseGreat idea. I like it that this story is told from Capt. Keyes' son. I like the idea of Capt. Keyes and Dr. Halsey getting together. What's gonna happen next? Update it soon. |