This is great. Just like the other one. They both rock.

ag. so sad...but i still loved the two stories...the writng style was veryy good, i love how u protrayed everything!

How heartbreaking. But for some reason, I like heartbreaking a lot of times. lol. Fluffy is good when I'm in a bad mood or in a really good mood but most of the time I like heartbreaking ... awesome job!

~*~Nicole~*~

that was very sad. to have that brilliant shining moment of hope and daises and then plop. though is it just me or was there no mention of the time lapse?
once again your writting is stellar. and its cool to see that you favor the same fics i do.
thanks.

Wow. Another great Trory author uncovered my me. Your writing style...wow. Your portrayal of the characters...perfect. I had just finished reading Metamorphsis, amazed when finished. I hope you update your stories soon. LOving this!

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That's so sad! I was hoping they would reunite but the way you wrote it is excellent of course. Keep writing Trories. :)

wow, you are really talented. I hope that you will continue this saga in some form because it's really interesting.

First of all, another stupendous story from you. As usual. You're such a great writer. And I suck at reviewing, but you knew that. Any chance that you'll write that Gypsy/Andrew UC? Please? Or at least WTF? Probably not, but even if you stick to future Trory I will still read everything you write because you're so damned good.

Thanks for the dedication. And I'm sure our beloved clowns would be flattered we keep dedicating fics to them. Either that or scared out of their minds.

Oh and if you write another chap, can you make it a Lit? Sorry, I had to say it!

I love it. How sad though. Serendipity bringing them back to Central Park and then having Rory's daughter come yelling 'Mommy'. Utterly heartbreaking for Tristan but if he hadn't married Natalie, sigh. But I can't help wondering who is Rory's husband? Did she finally get over Tristan? Please e-mail me or PM me (klm1a) from the fan forum board. I'd like to know. As always, fantastic writing. Can't wait for more fics, not to mention updates from you.

No, no, no! None of this for good stuff... no, I need more Tristan and Rory... please?

that was really good! :)

*GASP!* THIS IS SO SAD! SO DEPRESSING! well, except for the part where he got divorced... but the father of that child, better not be Dean! (joking)

please post soon! i'm dying to find out what happens next... if i was rory without the child, i would've ran away.

-Ivy-

This fic was absolutely beautiful and as usual you broke my heart. I loved that you delved into Tristan POV of their relationship and Rory suddenly disappearing from his apartment. Your last fic left me longing for his side of the story...so thank you.

As I was reading this story and neared the end I actually held out hope for a happy ending. When he found her in the park my breath caught and my heart started beating a little bit faster...and then devistation.

There are only two Trory writers that I will read ansty, sad fic from: you and Liza. You manage to pull it off with grace and style, not relying on heavy handed, sappy writing. And even though you once again broke my Trory heart...I loved it.

Hey!

This was really sad and beautiful at the same time. It was truly amazing. You are definitely one of the best one shot writers on this site. I especially liked this story, cause there was hardly any dialogue in it. You are an excellent writer. I loved the way you formed your sentences.

Bye, smile :-)

Ah, you're so good, fluffy! I want to cry. It's so hollow and empty and not happily ended *sulk*

But hee, you're a breath of fresh air. When I scrolled down the first page impatiently, couldn't find something good to read. And frustrated that I found nothing. Hah, I went to the thread and kaboom, a link!!

Well, okay enough rambling. I love the fic. Angsty but beautiful. I love how you described what Rory meant to Tristan.

Heh, keep it up!