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sleepallday
2009-11-12 . chapter 27
What an amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it, it has just the right amount of everything - angst, humour, romance,.. I just didn´t really understand why Elrond was so strongly opposed to Glorfindel´s and Lindir´s relationship. Why did G. have to promise? Did I miss something?
I loved all the little storylines, like the one with the injured warrior and his mate, amazing.. Are you planning a sequel? I would love to read Haldir/Erestor. And I have to say I loved Haldir in your fic.
Good job, keep writing:)
Saurowen
2009-11-06 . chapter 3
Oh my goodness, I just began to read this story, but I am compelled to review it RIGHT NOW.

How HILARIOUS! Poor Erestor, stiff as a board, frightened as all hell by drunken, randy Elrond. Tears were literally pouring out of my eyes as I tried to hold in the laughter (I am next to a sleeping baby, otherwise I would have roared at the top of my lungs). That was a great scenario.

I love the way you portray Haldir, so regal and witty, and I totally find Lindir's crush on Glorfindel to be very endearing. The way you write, seamlessly weaving varying elements such as family, storytelling, and admiration for a renowned hero, makes me want to read more. I am not one to read slash on a regular basis, but I am certainly glad that I came upon this. Excellent job so far!
triolet
2009-11-06 . chapter 27
This story so far has really surprised and impressed me. Your summary does not do it justice so it worried me as i started then i got swept away. You do need to check your punctuation more (apostrophes mainly) and perhaps add more description without the emotional tag. An interesting use of a minor character giving him importance and history. I particularly like this Haldir and Erestor and hope something you can continue with them. Very insightful take on the culture and dangers of pre Hobbit and LOTR. Thanks.
Beatrisu
2009-11-06 . chapter 27
O! I haven't seen anything from you in years, and I am so utterly happy you posted again!

I hope life is easier on you now, and that you're doing okay. *BIG HUGS*

The Pea.
xXduchessXx
2009-10-30 . chapter 16
1) no one cares about those rules

2)If you want to follow it, just take out the quoted material

3)The website link does not go to your website, you might want to check on that

It absolutly infuriates readers when they cannot get to the material and the author makes them chase around the web to find the missing material. Now I have to skip the chapter and guess as to what happens next. I like this story, but I fear that if I run across another deleated chapter, I shall abandon it completly.
Hiroe
2006-03-07 . chapter 26
*gasp* Are you ever going to update this story?! I NEED to find out what happens! :D
Linfindel
2004-08-08 . chapter 26
This is a beautifuly done and well crafted fic, with an excelent plot. Not to mention the pairing almost had me drooling onto the screen! I can't wait until you update!
some dude
2004-07-13 . chapter 26
more more more! i want more. so good. yep. anyways, please write more soon. very good. the sad bits are good, write more of them. yep. i know this isn't very helpful but i can't help it. thanks for listening.
Stardust60
2004-07-11 . chapter 26
So happy to see your update. I hope all is well with you and your family. Nice recap by Haldir about the events previous in the story to refresh our memories.

Another lovely chapter.
Soledad
2004-07-11 . chapter 16
I certainly can see that you fell in love with the Triple Harp. :) The description is fantastic. I love your attention to detail.
LOCISVU
2004-07-10 . chapter 26
Oh damn!Lindir sounds really ** for being lied at.
LOCISVU
2004-04-16 . chapter 1
When is this story going to be updated?
BButtercup
2004-03-05 . chapter 25
I'm late, gr. Finally, Glorfindel gets through to Lindir and the secret is out. And it was so wonderful the way the Glorfindel refused to let Lindir run away with him. Excellent update. Buttercup :o)
ShiningStar84
2004-02-15 . chapter 1
Mira! It's Laur ^_^. I hope you know how much I adore your fic because it is one of the best around.
I'm so anxious to know what happens next!
So I will bug you until you write chap 26 hehe.
Kisses,
Laur!
Stardust60
2004-02-08 . chapter 25
Uh Ohh, Vand is on the loose. I'm worried about Glorfindel, Lindir and Haldir meeting up with the escaped Vand in the woods. I wonder if the dungeon guard will get in trouble? He appears to have been a bit lax in watching out for his prisoner when he picked up the tray. Maybe they should had two guards to do that etc.
Finally, we learn the big secret that Glorfindel and others swore not to tell Lindir. Now, poor Lindir will start to heal after revealing his long-held guilty fears and feelings. Elrond still seems quite vexed with Glorfindel.
Only two more chapters to go and we will find out Lindir's gift (other than his love which is the best gift) for Glorfindel. Hope there will be a bit more of Erestor and Haldir. Was the potter of any special meaning other than Haldir seemed interested in him when they spoke that one time?
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