dat was pretty good keep it up!!

umm...THAT was a great peice of writing. i love how descriptive you were...not the ending i was hoping for...but ya' know. not EVERY story can/has ta be an inuyasha and kagome admitt their feelings and have 12 pups...like mine...lol. i love the fact that you didn't use ANY swearing in it. i think it's great that there can be great literature with out having to put stuff like that in it.

KEPP WRITING!
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sami

aww, tear. that was so sad and sweet! i can't belive how sweet it is! Lol, good choice of song too. it really set the mood. I think this one shot is awsome and had a great expansion on the origional episode. Good Job!

I like it a lot! Good job!

Ghetto-ness... ^_^

People dont start thinking I'm dumb for submitting a review to my own story, but I had 2 to respond to someone who reviewed my story: I did not copy anyone else's work Laura! Maybe you thought it was familiar because it was mostly episode 48. I meant to do it like that, I wanted to put the song there since the song fit in perfect for the episode. I dont know if any other person ever made this same story with the exact same episode and song (I doubt someone did), but if by some miracle they did, then I'm sry I didnt know about it. But I made this on my own, I never read another story like it so w/e. Oh and 2 those others who reviewed, thanks a lot for reviewing! And no, there wont be more, it's a one chapter story and sry the song wasnt included much in the story! BYE AND READ MY OTHER STORIES TOO PLZ!

*Esme

um, excuse me, but I could have sworn I had read this somewhere else before - it's practiacally a "copy-paste" work... are you sure you wrote it, or did you have to repost?

Wow,man.
I really hope you read this revuew.This has to be the best Inuyasha fict I've ever read, and I've read alot!Seriously!It was so good. I love that song too!Now I'm goona have it stuck in my head forever! Let me just tell you that you have a gift for writing.If you ever read this, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE e-mail me to tell me the name of you up coming fict! I'm like your #1 fan now, so it would be cool if you e-mailed me and stuff.THANKS FOR THE GREAT FICT!

Howdy! Great job on your story! I really do love "Don't Speak" by No Doubt cause it really fits the realtionship thingy. (Ha! 'Thingy', I'm so juvinile.) Anyway, I thought it was a great short story but I wished you had more of the song lyrics incorporated into the story. For those of you who haven't heard the song: LOOK FOR IT!!

Yea... so... BYE!

~FAMOUS~

nice job, and this is one of my favorite songs too, i have fought every urge i have had to write a song fic, especially this song, i vowed i never would, lol. Nice job, but i think kagome was ooc in her thoughts, at least in my opinion but i havent seen that far in the series so i really cant judge past my own conclusions. It was well written but a bit choppy in some parts gramatically. Very well done story wise ^__^

wow its amazing how well this story is based on the real 48 episode

this was a really good one shot story i loved it

why does inuyasha continue to think that he owes kikyo his life. it wasn't his fault that she died. and if it was, 'it takes two to tango', so she has as much fault in her own death as inuyasha..right?
this was a very cool story...inuyasha is such an idiot^-^.

I'm about cry...Oh...I loved it!
I can't wait for the episode 48!
This one shot is great!

I love the band No doubt! anyway I loved this chap. will you write more?