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treksez 7/14/10 . chapter 7
im loving this story please continue but i think you you couldve come up with abetter name then a sink i spose it CAN hold things if thats what you were aiming at but apart fromt hat i love this sotyr
Annabel H. Wildes 12/21/07 . chapter 7
That's funny.Has this been abandoned?
riegert8 3/30/07 . chapter 7
Good written story. I don't know if I could read anymore because the main Character Harry Potter don't look like he will be in this, just a minor character Albus Dumbledore
Evfrosyne 8/1/05 . chapter 7
Hmm... it's okay, I suppose, but it's moving way too fast. I like detail. The plot is fine, but try going slower and putting in more detail instead of flying through it. Put in simple things, experiences, so that he seems more... human. Good Luck.
Delete Here 7/4/04 . chapter 7
brilliant i love it
Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 7
Yaho! it worked! thats so amazing, I like the way that you did it, it didn't happen over night it took time, very clever of you. loved it so much
Kristina
Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 6
Good chapter, I like the fact that now he's found out the information it seems to take over his life, its something that does happen. I like it
Kristina
Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 5
I like the way that Albus finds out about Flamel, he reminds me of Harry, Ron and Hermione with all their snooping around. Very good chapter
Kristina
Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 4
Yes I like this, I'm hoping that you have a good way to 'unlock a sink' because we all know Dumbledore can do amgic. It is a very clever idea though
Kristina
Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 3
This is umm different. I like the idea that he is a 'sink' and I really want to see where you are going with this
Kristina
Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 2
I like the fact that he really thinks he's a squib and its left to the sorting hat to tell him that he could be great
Kristina
Krstna 5/11/04 . chapter 1
what a different idea, Albus Dumbledore thought of as a squib that is different, I can't wait to see how you develope this story
Kristina
Laterose 11/6/03 . chapter 7
Wow! I really like this! Hehe I liked the end of that chapter too.
star estrella 10/4/03 . chapter 7
I really, really-Did Isay really like it! Keep on going! PLEASE!
Illucia 9/12/03 . chapter 7
Did he loose all sink's abilities?
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