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| DementedLeaf 2007-06-08 ch 9,  | abuseFinally had time to read this, now I'm not exhausted and exams are over for a while. Hm, just remembered something I have to do. Anyway, the story. Very good, I like it. I always appreciate the stories with good English AND a good plot :) One very minor point, though - to describe something belonging to "it", you'd use "its" rather than "it's"... English really is completely bizarre sometimes, but "it's" is only supposed to be used as a contraction of "it is". Apart from that, I'm impressed with everything. The characters seem to be in character, the language and plotline are good... I'll stop rambling now :-P |
| FaithInLove 2006-10-28 ch 9, | abuseHeartbreaking. Beautiful. Masterpiece. Thank you! |
| unforgivables 2006-09-20 ch 9, anon. | abuseOh my good,even though i am a boy,i nearly cried...do you know the song lonely day (system of a down)?Try hear it when Harry dies and Ginny sees his eyes..ah i am going to cry again..(not joking)! |
| Matteic 2006-05-23 ch 7, | abuse"Green Flame Torch" ? Am I dreaming or are you using in a HARRY POTTER story an artefact that we-didn't-know-it-existed, that we-don't-really-understand-how-it-works, and that seems-to-be-totally-created-for-the-occasion ? My god, it seems you've read to much comics or something and you're using it to make dramatic effects ! (Sorry if my grammar is false, I'm French) |
| alexkimpotter 2006-05-15 ch 9, | abuseIt is really good and although I never wanted Harry to die, the way you put it into writing and all that made it less shocking but it was really good. Alex Kim Potter |
| prettiermusings 2006-01-02 ch 9, | abuseWell, I really hate that Harry died. I commend you for having the courage to kill him off, but I just don't like reading stories where Harry dies, even though I know it's a very real possibility (I really, really hope the 7th book doesn't end this way, or Marked, even if it's horrifically beautiful). The rest was good, though. I liked the whole mental thing (sorry, I don't really know how to describe it) that Harry and Voldemort were doing when Voldemort was trying to get the Prophecy. And I'm glad Harry at least got to tell Ginny he loved her, even though it made it even more sad! Good story overall. Even if I didn't want Harry to die, it was written nicely. :) I reread it with Angel playing and it made me cry... |
| Cortez2401 2005-12-30 ch 9, | abuseGood job but it was just plain silly having Harry die this way. You'd better have a happy ending for your other story Marked |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-17 ch 9, | abuseNice! Hey, do you mind reviewing my story one more time since I just reviewed this entire story when I am suppose to be doing homework? * puppy face * A very loyal fan, Eddie1990 P.S. Please don't tell my mom about the last part! P.S.S. Update "Marked" soon! P.S.S.S. Sayonora Rosie5 - sama! |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-17 ch 8, | abuseHOW DARE YOU KILL HARRY! Not that I can complain. I wanted to see one where he was:) |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-17 ch 7, | abusefunny idea how you killed him but still good! Burn Voldie the Baldy! Burn in Hell for all of enternity! |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-17 ch 6, | abuseVery nice! |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-17 ch 5, | abuseNice! |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-17 ch 4, | abuseNice! |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-17 ch 3, | abuseMarvolous! |
| Satan Junior No Super Henta... 2005-10-16 ch 2, | abuseNice! |