BobR, pretty much the typical example of stupid ideas and lazy writing. I cringe when I see BobR next to a title of a Tenchi fanfic; I'd rather have high voltage electrodes attached to my balls until they're black and crispy than read on of his musings.

Even your intro summary, which should have been carefully composed to sell this rubbish, is sloppy: "Wherein Ayeka must face up to the consequences of her actions."

It should be: "Ayeka must face the consequences of her actions."

At least learn to write before afflicting the rest of humanity with your inane, 3rd grade ideas.

damn good

Hey man, are you going to update this? I love your work and have for a couple of years now. I'm just chopping at the bit over seeing this one be finished. Keep us post my man!

I have just finished reading this whole story chain up to here and I have got to say that this is by far one of the better Tenchi Muyo story chains that I have read. However, I am disapointed that the rest of it is not here! I absolutely love the story, and I would enjoy the rest of it. So, even though it's been two years since there was an update, I'd appreciate it if you brought it out of mothballs and updated it so that it was at least finished. If you have decided not to do that, please reply to the e-mail I have sent you and tell me if you would mind it if I took over in your place.

I have just read your 'Conversations' series again for the 4 time and injoyed it just as i did the first time i read it.
So when are you going to update this story!
I really hope you get round to it soon ^_^V Bye!

Oh.. kay. I see what's gone on here. ...though now I'm even more confused and curious who the new comers are. And for killing off someone as important as Ryoko is the story as well as to the other characters, they don't seem very sad. It just seems too light-hearted.

And you'll have to forgive me for poking you about chapter 4 of Royal Quest here but when Ayeka was informed of Ryoko's death, it- it didn't do it for me but I'm not sure what I would accept as a valid scene.

Anyway, keep at it. You get better and better.

:o

You killed Ryoko?! Well, **. Looks like I have bit to catch up on.

I liked Ayeka's reaction though. Just that weird, incredibly shocked feeling she gives off.

I'll have to finish Royal Quest first though.

I agree with Dameas. An okay fic but Sasami is one of my favorite characters, after Ayeka! But the way you portray the blue haired girl is ugh! Trashy.

Getting more prevalent in fanfiction these days and at first it was funny as a joke with the first fics that did it but now the novelty wore off and it just makes me want to shove the whole story aside. Which in fact, I will, seeing better fics on the horizon.

Introducing the 5th business! More of my favorite GP detective, and as usual you've paid great attention to detail a la the venerable Yosho. I really can't imagine having to keep from tripping over a detail from the large novel you've amassed, that being said...Earlier,I meant that she went from airhead to Sherlock Holmes in 6 seconds, part of the overall appeal of Mihoshi I'll admit, but even Sherlock would've needed to smoke a lb. of shag to make those deductive leaps. Then again, Fitzgerald did say that the definition of intelligence is "being able to hold two contrary concepts at the same time",and thats Mihoshi to a tee. Perhaps I'm just nittpicking, if so take it as a backhanded complement i.e. I've nothing else to ** about;) Joan Wilder huh? Should I have the feeling that I should know who she is? Speaking of Hellsing, you never did continue Of Vampires,Demons and Godesses . Washu and Alucard? I'd better quit before my head starts spinning. Feh, nittpicking, glaring and paranoia...hope you get better reviews.

"Clean up those damn papers Anderson!"

This story just continues to get more interesting. Two new unknown characters that are somehow involved with the Jurai Royals. I very much can't wait to see how this whole thing plays out.

Well, this was a delightful treat. Not very often you see an entire chapter devoted to the blinde ditz and she handled herself quite well (until the landing as usual)

Now I wasn't aware that Earth novelists and actors were known outside the Sol system. Is the entertainment in the rest of the universe that dull?

interesting chapter and i have my suspisions as to who the dark haired lady is... we shall see if i am corect... as usual i await the next chapter eagerly. Ja-ne =(^_^)=

Joan Wilder, eh? She seems to know an awful lot about Mihoshi and her ship. And she heals fast too. Hmm...something awefully sneaky about this situation. And who's this other guy? And how does Yosho know him? Blast! Damn you and your ever confounding fics!

Two _new_ characters? This ought to be interesting.

'Joan Wilder' - Obviously someone who knows a lot about Earth and the Royals living there. Not to mention the GP on staff and the _other_ inhabitants. "avoid official entanglements" Whom does she think she is? Ben Kenobi? And she's trying to find the family on Earth. HHm...

'the smuggler' - Knows an awful lot as well, doesn't he? Loved his comeback about Yukinojo. Must have a Heck of a deal going with the Jurian space navy to keep from being listed as a criminal in Jurai. Wait... Yosho knows him. Secret Service with the Royals? A Jurain James Bond?

Would the people in position happen to be a couple of queens? And maybe a King?

SAY... Joan Wilder has dark hair and purple eyes. This sounds familiar. Have we met her before? Katsuhito seems to know her. C'mon, Bob. Give! :-)

Another great chapter. And yes, Sasami seems like a **( She was doing a guy who didn't even have a name in the previous story when her sister was getting kidnapped! Now she's going to Chicago! What do you think was her motivation for getting away from the family and going to America? I doubt it's for studying or friends). I look forward too your EXPLANATION for it.

And liking Ayeka in leather isn't a crime. ^^"