 Mary Ann Summers 6/29/09 . chapter 1I really like it.
Don't worry about what Angry Angel says... if they didn't notice that's why it's called "Fan Fiction" as in to create your own story even if it is straying away from what happened in the show. So what if she wasn't in the series finale, she could be a zombie if you wanted her to.
Besides, I liked that Sabrina is there, it adds a better feel to it! |
 Angry Angel 12/27/05 . chapter 1 It is not a bad story, but it wasn't in the TV series. Let Our Angel Live was the last episode. And another thing Sabrina wasn't in the final season. Don't you stupid fucking people ever watch TV. |
 MaryRose 10/13/03 . chapter 8What an ending? Although, somehow it seems a fitting ending. I really liked the story. |
 imagine6 10/9/03 . chapter 8Wow! I like it! Makes you wonder if she'll really resign. If she comes back would she do something that saves/protects one of the other angels or Bosley? Would she be the only one to crack the case as it were? Hm very intriguing. Keep writing! |
 imagine6 9/30/03 . chapter 1Krystina, I love this! It is cool to see what you think might have happened after the last episode. The Kelly character, I felt was never fully developed. I like what you are writing. Keep going! |
 Gill T 9/30/03 . chapter 7 Oh My God ! I was seriously starting to cry when she quit! Kelly was always my fav angel ( as you have probably guessed)Will there be more or is it finished? Please keep going ! This was really great Well Done ! |
 AP Especially 9/15/03 . chapter 6*sniff* Beautiful. (By the way, what are these dreams that are plaguing Kelly?) |
 AP Especially 9/15/03 . chapter 4Hello! I'm only up to chapter 4 right now, but I just wanted to say that I'm glad you brought back Sabrina. Why? Because that's a good indication that your story is going to be about more than what Kelly ate (or didn't eat!) at the hospital. Can we expect adventurous adventures in the future? |
 MaryRose 9/15/03 . chapter 6Looks like there is going to be more for Kelly than just recovering physically. She's going to have to recover mentally. Can she? Only more chapters will tell. |
 Gill T 9/12/03 . chapter 6 Hey again ! I really liked this one, i hope you r going to still continue cos i still feel at a lose end post if and when more is coming |
 Gill T 9/9/03 . chapter 4 I'm so chuffed that you brought back Sabrina ! Do you think you will continue with the story cos i would like to c wot happens next ! |
 Gill T 9/9/03 . chapter 4 I'm so chuffed that you broght back Sabrina ! Do you think you will continue with the story cos i would like to c wot happens next ! |
 Rach 9/9/03 . chapter 4 Wow -great part!
Glad Sabrina is there for her!
you have to post more ASAP! |
 Rach 9/7/03 . chapter 3 post more soon! |
 AP Especially 9/3/03 . chapter 2So far, so good. I like it! |